| "The things our hearts want us to have" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Not too bad
Reviewed By: Syn Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, this was a fairly good fic. I had a couple of issues with the occasional grammar snafu, but it was still very enjoyable. Can't wait to read more of your work, Syn alexander
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Reviewed By: James Michael Ellis (a.k.a Timber Wolf) On: August 13, 2002 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is marvellous work!
I am a big fan of yuri/yaoi fictions, this is an excellent pairing that has been chosen - Sylia and Priss.
I am looking forward to chapter 3! |
