| "Watch out for the Green Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: kei799 On: November 22, 2007 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew... That was really intense... Reealky enjoyed the witty dialogues and the barbs. Just too much rough sex though. c",) Good writing nonetheless
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 14:15 CDT
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Ah, yes! Finally Yuuri is back. That moment was a little confusing, and hopefully you will make things a little clearer in the following chapters. But, I am sure that was indeed a hard portion to write. Anyways, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: BelleoftheBall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 16:38 CDT
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Where's Yuuri? :(
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Reviewed By: lazytologin On: September 30, 2007 13:57 CDT
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Finally we leave the palace! Great chap!
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Reviewed By: yuytiuyig On: September 09, 2007 20:03 CDT
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Great chapter! Can't wait until Yuuri shows up again..
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 19:05 CDT
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The whole Amae's father was a Mazoku, came hurt and from Shin Makoku, makes you think it's Yuuri. But, whats with the blue eyes? Hmm..
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Reviewed By: jghjkhjhl On: July 26, 2007 19:05 CDT
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AHH I LOVE YOU.
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Title: **runningStartPOUNCE**
Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh!ooh!!**shimmies in anticipation** Where's Yuuri??? >____< **shimm~~~mmies** Yay. I'm glad you got the psudo-sequel up and going~~~ X3 And the smex is great... i mean... plot... i mean..... oooh it's all good so far. And I'm hooked!! Because there's somethin' fishy goin' on on this planet~ Heh.. pretty boys = concubines **snickers** S'good thing Wolfy's so feisty~
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 05:18 CDT
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You really like the idea/word pheremones(sp?) don't you?
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 21:57 CDT
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Eh, it only took me about 3 hours. I guess you could say I am a fast reader?
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Title: ^_^. That was close
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 18:34 CDT
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you had me going there i really thought they were going to break up. *exhale* well i'm glad they're going to stay together and work things out.
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Reviewed By: whitelilacs On: April 23, 2007 20:03 CDT
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Hehe, after reading the first one I had to check out this one. I love your Murata, since it's definitely a bit different from the vision I have of him (but I've only started reading KKM fics more recently). 3 wives, 7 children. XD I'll admit at the beginning it was a bit hard for me to get into it with the original character starting out the fic (hehe, maybe reading fanfiction while working on homework isn't a good idea XD;;;). But good job so far, definitely looking forward to future chapters of this fic, and more Yuuri-Wolfram goodness. :D
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 15:54 CDT
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OMGosh update please
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Title: Update soon!
Reviewed By: Jenna K On: April 09, 2007 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally read KKM, but this story was cute, wonderfully hot and enticing...The changes of scene were a little abrupt, but this didn't deprive any enjoyment from the story. I haven't read the prequel, but I hope you update soon. - Jenna K
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 16:26 CDT
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they're all grown up yay. this was really good. i liked when the guard got caught watching them, that was funny. you really can't blame wolfram for being so dam sexy
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