| "Watch out for the Green Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: iNchang On: January 26, 2008 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeek! i lab it! more! more! tnx.
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Reviewed By: Sheinah On: January 17, 2008 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was quite a fic. I absolutely loved WOTP (must have read it at least 3 times) and I loved this one just as much. Since Wolf is my favourite character, I was quite happy that the story focused on him. Man, he had it quite tough XD My only complaint is that there are so much things left unsolved. Not only Faraya, but I was also expecting Yuuri to find what had happened to Wolfram somehow. And Kyota... Poor thing. I fell in love with him in WOTP and I was so glad that he was starting to move on. I really thought that it would work between him and Amae. Oh well, some authors are sadists deep down lol. So... any chance there's gonna be a sequel to this one too? 'cause if you write one, I'll definitely read it. By the way, sorry for not reviewing before, but with long fics like that, I hate having to wait between the chapters and a lot of authors often don't finish them. But if you do write a sequel, I know I wont be able to wait until it's all finished. No pressure at all, ne? Ah, and before I forget, I love your writing style. The lemons are really good, too ^_^ Well, that's all, I think. I just wanted to tell you that this fic is full of win and that I really had a good time reading it.
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Reviewed By: Rachel123 On: January 14, 2008 21:17 CST
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As I was reading the final paragraphs, I was thinking, "Hmmm? What could possibly be next?". Then I saw the bolded "The End", and I think my heart skipped a beat. I think this is the first fic that I have followed the whole way through from start to finish. Man, it is a sad feeling! It kinda makes me wanna feel like I want to die inside, like after finishing a good book, lol. But, great story, and congrats on finishing it!
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Reviewed By: :D On: December 31, 2007 08:28 CST
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yay!ive been waiting for this!thanks for the update!=) can wait for the next chapter..=)
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Reviewed By: chayron. On: December 27, 2007 05:51 CST
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Rachel123, don't worry, you'll see an end to the fic. It's that my beta is very busy and I haven't heard from her for a while, so I am waiting for her to send the beta-read chapter back. As for the end of the fic - I'm almost done with the last chapter :)
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Reviewed By: Rachel123 On: December 27, 2007 00:00 CST
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You were always persistent with updates...where'd you go? :/ I'm very understanding of any reasons why you haven't updated, I'd just like to see an ending to this, I have been following it ever since it started :/
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Reviewed By: :D On: December 22, 2007 07:34 CST
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update please!:D i've been wating for the next part since last month!:D sorry do i sound impatient?nah im just excited about the next chapter;)
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Reviewed By: usagi1515 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, please finish it! I need to know what happens to Faraya.
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Reviewed By: Jessi V On: November 28, 2007 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed the entire series so far. I hope that you continue writing. I'd love to find out what happens.
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Reviewed By: kei799 On: November 22, 2007 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew... That was really intense... Reealky enjoyed the witty dialogues and the barbs. Just too much rough sex though. c",) Good writing nonetheless
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 14:15 CDT
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Ah, yes! Finally Yuuri is back. That moment was a little confusing, and hopefully you will make things a little clearer in the following chapters. But, I am sure that was indeed a hard portion to write. Anyways, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: BelleoftheBall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 16:38 CDT
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Where's Yuuri? :(
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Reviewed By: lazytologin On: September 30, 2007 13:57 CDT
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Finally we leave the palace! Great chap!
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Reviewed By: yuytiuyig On: September 09, 2007 20:03 CDT
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Great chapter! Can't wait until Yuuri shows up again..
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 19:05 CDT
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The whole Amae's father was a Mazoku, came hurt and from Shin Makoku, makes you think it's Yuuri. But, whats with the blue eyes? Hmm..
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