| "Much Needed Healing" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Title: inspiring
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 04:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you,ve got an inspiring story i love the whole plot i hope kagome and sesshomaru stay together they make such a great couple but then i feel sorry for inuyasha because he doesn't know what hes done to her over the time period they've been away from each other her hurt her more then he thinks. but any ways keep up the awesome work incredible author im becoming one of your biggest fans so please update soon can't wait for the new chapters amazing work fanominal im very impressed by the way its written keep us guessing on what happens next i love the way it doesn't give everything out and you got to read to gain more keep up the astonishing work your biggest fan *hugs you* im adding you to my favorite authors and im adding your story to my favorite your so good i love the whole plot keep doing what your good at keep writing for your fans your #1 fan *hugs you again* :*)
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Title: inspiring
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 04:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you,ve got an inspiring story i love the whole plot i hope kagome and sesshomaru stay together they make such a great couple but then i feel sorry for inuyasha because he doesn't know what hes done to her over the time period they've been away from each other her hurt her more then he thinks. but any ways keep up the awesome work incredible author im becoming one of your biggest fans so please update soon can't wait for the new chapters amazing work fanominal im very impressed by the way its written keep us guessing on what happens next i love the way it doesn't give everything out and you got to read to gain more keep up the astonishing work your biggest fan *hugs you* im adding you to my favorite authors and im adding your story to my favorite your so good i love the whole plot keep doing what your good at keep writing for your fans your #1 fan *hugs you again* :*)
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Reviewed By: KougasWoman21993 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 13:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE! MUST READ NEXT PART ITS SO GOOOD!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you want a cranky review about length huh? Alright here goes my best shot :: clears throat :: YOU FRICKEN made two short chapters and LEFT ME BEGGING FOR MORE!? HOW DARE YOU! I've been reading your story every day, rereading it to find ANY FACTS I might have missed and then you write TWO SHORT CHAPTERS?!?!?!?! :: coughs :: ok...there was my best attempt at a cranky review. Anyway, please write more before I go insane from imagining what you might write in the future. I really do enjoy what you write.
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: May 04, 2007 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far and curious whats going happen next. Wondering what your going to do with Inyuasha though he and Kagome did love each other and the both were so sad losing each other. So they should be together some how like maybe Kagome mating both brothers. I see the Sesshormou part but really he hated here in the feudal era and stealing his brothers love is cold plus what Kagome when Inyuasha returns her feelings for him aren't just going go away. anyways great job can't wait to read more.
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Title: Good read
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I think your story is very good, I have to admit that I love some of your little end of chapter skits. Plot vs Lemon. An eternal battle for all us hentia writers but you've mixed the two well in this story. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: May 02, 2007 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..this is great. I hope you continue to write this and finish it..one of my petpeves is when really good authors stop at crucial moments. I hope you won't do that. ^_^ once again..AMAZING
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Reviewed By: Jasmine aka INK On: May 01, 2007 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue! I Love this story to Death! :D Keep up the good work and please write more!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very good thing when you can't write a short lemon. When a person write's like you do, a short lemon wouldn't have the same feel as a good, well written, thoughtful, lemon. More please ^_^
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Reviewed By: elle6778 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 19:39 EDT
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I've always liked reading about a strong Kagome. And in this fic, you've started off with her broken and so far, working up to the point where she is regaining her strength. The way you dealt with Sesshoumaru's reluctance and final capitulation was also really fun to read. Keep going! You're doing a great job.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...THREESOME! I want a threesome with the brothers and Kagome. OVERALL RATING: 10100101010101010110
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Trini421 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 10:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i hope kagome ends up with sess. I love this story!
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was very good! You asked us if you should continue this or The Telling...they are both so amazing, how can you ask us to choose. I choose both...this one has peeked my curiousity though..Inu is alive....man, this is a definite twist and could get very interesting. Cant wait to see what you have in store for us next! Great job, highly enjoyable!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 17:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very interesting story thus far.i'm liking that you have sesshoumaru the one who found her, only because of the difference of their personalities. i've read a few like this (heck, i wrote one very similiar to this) but i love your level of diction for Sesshiles and syntex for your story.
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 19:59 EDT
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The storyline is interesting....and yay! I get to write your first review! HOW AWESOME IS THAT!!!! Update soon!
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