| "Sit Vis Tecum" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 13:59 CDT
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Good chapter, liked how you did Win and liked the interactions =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 20:14 CDT
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Loved it, also love that you made Havoc cajun, love the jokes and aw I just loved it all. Since I have a cold that's all I'm going to say for now, but seriously this is great =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 22:48 CDT
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Good chapter, the bit with Envy and Lust I thought was good since we never do get to understand why they are so sadistic, I like your explanation. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling errors and you have still done a great job with keeping everyone in character, like I said before but now even the FMA characters don't seem as OOC since I've gotten to see a bit more of them. Great Job =)
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 19:13 CDT
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We get to see more of the homonculi! : D Obviously they're going to be very important in this story, once past the introductions and explanations. I'm really impressed on how well you've managed to keep everything extremely in character, as well as keeping everything serious, but not so much so that it's depressing. Good work, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 01:02 CDT
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You definitely have the characterization of the CSI characters down, you haven't even made the FMA too ooc even with this being AU. This is a great story, I was trying to think of a way to do this crossover but you beat me to it and have done a great job. So keep it up =)
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 22:37 CDT
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Finally! Disclosure. Now the investigation can actually get somewhere.
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 20:46 CDT
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This story actually made me go out and search every TV station we recieve for CSI: Miami. xD It's getting exciting; for some reason I wasn't even slightly expecting Envy (even though I should have)...
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 12:35 CDT
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It's getting even better now; I love how everyone was totally shocked at Warrick and Greg just randomly popping back in while they were going insane trying to figure out what happened. xD Good luck with writer's block! (Of course, with the rate you're putting chapters up, either you're not getting any, or you've already had them written ahead of time so writer's block isn't even an issue.)
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Reviewed By: stardragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 15:14 CDT
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interesting. I think you have got the rhythm of Horatio's speaking down. I can't wait to see how all of you very many plot strings tie together.
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Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 04:20 CDT
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SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! That's so flippin cool!!!! I know less than nothing about CSI, but the FMA characters are flippin sweet!!!!!! Woot!!!!
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 17:42 CDT
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It's getting even better! :D Now that Ed and Al are in it, things can really start happening. Love the new chapter; good luck with writing the next!
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Reviewed By: Ebn105 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 19:49 CDT
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This is really good so far. I love it. I would have never thought of this cross over, but it's really good how ur doing it. And all the characters are written in character. This is so good so far, can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 17:54 CDT
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This already has me hooked, and you've only got the prologue and the first chapter up! I've never even heard of this crossover before, but it's amazing! I giggled when I finally realized that Havoc had shown up in the prologue. Well-written, as all of your stories are. Can't wait for the next update; good luck with any and all writer's block!
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