| "Whispers Of A Treasure" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Hi Baby Dragon
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Baby dragon its me Jessica, your story is really good and I found it very funny. I still think you should become a writer :D Also I added your fanfic to the writers corner as I told you a few days ago: http://animevengeance.net/forum
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work...its goin in ma favs...update soon...so kagome is not a demon rite (the fang thingy)......
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Reviewed By: C Moon On: April 08, 2007 02:58 CDT
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Hey a little late on the review.(My oh so wonderfull computer crashed) I was planing to review right after I read the 2nd chapter. Anyway I was wondering if this story is going to be a type of spin with Princess Mononoke? It now seems to be kinda the case. Regardless your work is wonderfull and I can't wait for the next chapter. Read ya soon! ... Yah that was horrible ... sorry.
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Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 11:04 CDT
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Ranma you have to remember, is translated from Japanese to English, so the translators will put in words that make sense to us stupid foreigners. Amazon is probably one of those words. Wonder what the original Japanese word was.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Scarlet Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it keep it up
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Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 19:28 CDT
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If you're going to make wild warrior women appear in a story, unless it is in Greece, DON'T call them amazons. Amazon is a word the Japanese don't have. Tarantulas are not native to Japan, they are desert/rainforest creatures. Japan has neither of those climates. It would be better if it was just a youkai spider of some sort. Pay attention to where words and ideas come from and this story isn't too bad. Keep up the good work
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