| "Whispers Of A Treasure" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: August 31, 2008 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it and it would be great to read more thanks.
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Title: such a good story
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found that the beginning of the story is rather slow and boring. But, when Inuyasha is lost in the forest, the story is getting better…better.. better.. and now I'm craving it!! It's so addictive , the plot is really good, the characters well built and development of the story and the characters is so natural. It's a really good story, one of the best Inuyasha fanfic I've ever read so far. I felt sorry for the story if you didn't continue it. It is too good to be left hanging. Hope you will get idea to continue it soon. Anyway, I really hope Sesshoumaru will get some taste for chocolate. I want to know his reaction, oh..must be cute..*drool
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 21:45 CST
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Hi,hope all is well. Just sending a line wishing you "Happy Holidays" and hoping to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 19:30 CDT
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Thank you, Thank you, for that awesome chapter. They're getting to know each other better and now he knows her first name. She still needs to be less guarded with him but hey,gotta start small. Souta is a little sneaky something but I'm glad someone else is on board the Kagome/Inuyasha train. Wonder how he's going to meddle in their situation. Now all we need to do is something about his ill begotten marriage issue, si. Well till the next one, happy writing.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: June 02, 2007 22:59 CDT
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Damn, I forgot he was married! That little detail isgoing to bite him in the ass later on.
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Title: Ch. 8 Formatting Issues
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 20:31 CDT
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Please reformat chapter 8 so I can read it without getting a headache. And good luck with your dog. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 00:48 CDT
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SSIIGHH,what a great first date even though the both of them don't realize it yet. They still have a long way to go in opening up to each other but this was a good start. Those two have more walls built around them than Fort Knox perhaps just some more time together will fix that,(hint hint).Adding in the children was also a nice touch,she got a chance to see him in action with the little ones and I don't think for one moment she's let it go unnoticed that he's a natural and proberly will be an attentive dad. You're doing an amazing job can't wait for the next one, update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 02:06 CDT
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This story is really great, I love reading it. I'm glad that Inuyasha is being treated as a friend and not a foe by the villagers. Why does Kagome have such an attitude with him and when will she see him as more than just a nuisance. Bankotsu and Kagome,ewwww neva that. Update soon P.S Will Sesshomaru make a surprise visit.
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: ddfly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a super treat its long and there's more expalanations going on in the story. I also loved the fact that u also remembered to put some vocab translations this time...the last time i was a td bit lost on some words. Ur chapter this time was superb and very comical i loved the fact that u also took time to describe each and every set of character in the story. that made it even better. Well hoope u update soon enough again. i really do ejoy ur story overall and i believe it has its own uniqueness about it. thanx again till next time
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 03:11 CDT
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Just started reading the story and all I can say is more more more. Update soon
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Title: Brill!!!
Reviewed By: jewell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. Definately becoming one of my favourites. Can't wait to see wat happens next! Please update it soon!
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: ddfly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is spectacular. you are starting off in the right dorection of being an awsome writer. THis story seems to be a spin off of Princess Mononoke...is it?. Anyways keep up the amazing work and i hope you update pretty soon. i cant wait to see what happens next. Keep it up
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 14:07 CDT
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EPPPP UP DATE SOONNNN
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with snowecat....great speech little detail....anyways that was such a sad way ti bring in shippo...is kagome the daugther or midoriko and the wolf dude...raikon or something? soif that true that would like make her half human and half wolf..so if yash is a inu-hanyou..then kags is a ookami-hanyou? im guessin here.... inukagome4life
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Title: snowecat
Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 16:08 CDT
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Interesting way to bring in Shippo. Glad Miroku can read something other than the Kama Sutra. Remember to bury Shippo's dad, that will help the kit. And it's an honorable thing to do. Tsubaki's lying through her teeth about the gold, it's the Shikon isn't it? Is she working for Naraku on the side? You need more detail in what's going on around the characters, and describe what they're doing and how they are dressed and such. First-writers usually have a great deal of speech and very little detail.
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