| "Whispers Of A Treasure" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 00:48 CDT
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SSIIGHH,what a great first date even though the both of them don't realize it yet. They still have a long way to go in opening up to each other but this was a good start. Those two have more walls built around them than Fort Knox perhaps just some more time together will fix that,(hint hint).Adding in the children was also a nice touch,she got a chance to see him in action with the little ones and I don't think for one moment she's let it go unnoticed that he's a natural and proberly will be an attentive dad. You're doing an amazing job can't wait for the next one, update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 02:06 CDT
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This story is really great, I love reading it. I'm glad that Inuyasha is being treated as a friend and not a foe by the villagers. Why does Kagome have such an attitude with him and when will she see him as more than just a nuisance. Bankotsu and Kagome,ewwww neva that. Update soon P.S Will Sesshomaru make a surprise visit.
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: ddfly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a super treat its long and there's more expalanations going on in the story. I also loved the fact that u also remembered to put some vocab translations this time...the last time i was a td bit lost on some words. Ur chapter this time was superb and very comical i loved the fact that u also took time to describe each and every set of character in the story. that made it even better. Well hoope u update soon enough again. i really do ejoy ur story overall and i believe it has its own uniqueness about it. thanx again till next time
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 03:11 CDT
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Just started reading the story and all I can say is more more more. Update soon
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Title: Brill!!!
Reviewed By: jewell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. Definately becoming one of my favourites. Can't wait to see wat happens next! Please update it soon!
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: ddfly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is spectacular. you are starting off in the right dorection of being an awsome writer. THis story seems to be a spin off of Princess Mononoke...is it?. Anyways keep up the amazing work and i hope you update pretty soon. i cant wait to see what happens next. Keep it up
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 14:07 CDT
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EPPPP UP DATE SOONNNN
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with snowecat....great speech little detail....anyways that was such a sad way ti bring in shippo...is kagome the daugther or midoriko and the wolf dude...raikon or something? soif that true that would like make her half human and half wolf..so if yash is a inu-hanyou..then kags is a ookami-hanyou? im guessin here.... inukagome4life
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Title: snowecat
Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 16:08 CDT
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Interesting way to bring in Shippo. Glad Miroku can read something other than the Kama Sutra. Remember to bury Shippo's dad, that will help the kit. And it's an honorable thing to do. Tsubaki's lying through her teeth about the gold, it's the Shikon isn't it? Is she working for Naraku on the side? You need more detail in what's going on around the characters, and describe what they're doing and how they are dressed and such. First-writers usually have a great deal of speech and very little detail.
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Title: Hi Baby Dragon
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Baby dragon its me Jessica, your story is really good and I found it very funny. I still think you should become a writer :D Also I added your fanfic to the writers corner as I told you a few days ago: http://animevengeance.net/forum
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work...its goin in ma favs...update soon...so kagome is not a demon rite (the fang thingy)......
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Reviewed By: C Moon On: April 08, 2007 02:58 CDT
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Hey a little late on the review.(My oh so wonderfull computer crashed) I was planing to review right after I read the 2nd chapter. Anyway I was wondering if this story is going to be a type of spin with Princess Mononoke? It now seems to be kinda the case. Regardless your work is wonderfull and I can't wait for the next chapter. Read ya soon! ... Yah that was horrible ... sorry.
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Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 11:04 CDT
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Ranma you have to remember, is translated from Japanese to English, so the translators will put in words that make sense to us stupid foreigners. Amazon is probably one of those words. Wonder what the original Japanese word was.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Scarlet Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it keep it up
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Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 19:28 CDT
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If you're going to make wild warrior women appear in a story, unless it is in Greece, DON'T call them amazons. Amazon is a word the Japanese don't have. Tarantulas are not native to Japan, they are desert/rainforest creatures. Japan has neither of those climates. It would be better if it was just a youkai spider of some sort. Pay attention to where words and ideas come from and this story isn't too bad. Keep up the good work
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