"The Ballet Recital" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: xCarCrashHeartx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 16:38 CDT Comment/Review: the story was good but i would quit the colourfulness, its kinda confusing looking at all those colours (or just make em darker). also, i think the story would have been better if its in paragraph format, not "script" format. that way you could explain and describe many more things. but i really did like the story.. please continue writing well!
| Reviewed By: Chieko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 19:52 CDT Comment/Review: Lol of course i'm not gonna rate my own writting yall just tell me how i did how it could be better blah blah blah you know the drill right?
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