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| "Under My Skin" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you already know it's a damn hot story, so I won't go into that. Loved it! You write Ken and Aya and Yohji so perfectly; normally I cringe when Yohji calls Aya "Baby," but it sounds so right here. I loved the closing section; in particular: "If the smirk is cute, it's all over." Brilliant.
| Reviewed By: RS On: April 06, 2007 22:16 CDT
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*HOT*. Very, very hot, maybe one of your hottest yet; can't tell you why but it just is. More ???
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So very, very good. Poor Aya, and poor Ken. The interactions both between Aya and Ken, and Aya and Yohji were just perfect -- and for the latter, quite hot as well.
| Reviewed By: jujubean On: April 04, 2007 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good i hope there is more.
| Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 14:04 CDT
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Was this just a one-shot? *pouty* Will it have a sequel? *hopeful* In other words, I found this to be very delightful, and it makes me want to know what will happen with them and how will Ken handle it when he finds out about them. Then again, I'm a bit of a sucker for the ones that eventually have Aya and Yohji admit their feelings for each other going beyond the physical. Not to say that the physical isn't fun, too. It is indeed, as you demonstrated for us here. ;)
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