| "Past Never Dies" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 14, 2002 11:12 CST
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. I hope you add more soon. |
Reviewed By: Black K. On: October 12, 2002 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Black: Dat fan fiction was pretty good,
It's been a while since I've read a fan fiction with
such class.
Yami Malatea: Would ya mind keeping It down shrimp
I want ta sleep.
Black: OK. -_-..... My Yami liked da story too.
Yami Malatea: stop dat chatter of I swear I'll wring
Your NECK!
Black: ~walks over to counter part and threats her with
an electic tooth brush~ One more %$#@#$ WORD OUT OF YOU
AND I"LL RAM THIS THING DOWN YOUR ......DON'T MAKE
ME BRING OUT DA FRYING PAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!As I was saying
I liked da story but you've got ta update it you got that
or nobody will R&R it ok!
Yami Malatea: let go of my hair my Dark one.
Black: ~evil grin~ (lights can be so guble) |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is getting VERY good and interesting!! I have to know more!! Keep it up and write more!!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =) |
Reviewed By: I.T. On: June 26, 2002 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
just UPDATE!!! |
