| "Small Town Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed your story, and eagerly await the next chapters. I would like to say that some of the grammatical errors are just in the use of the wrong word or it's misspelled like pourpise should be purpose. I've also noticed that some times the wrong words have been used, such as when Kagome saw Inuyasha/Kikyo kiss it has Inuyasha yelling, "Inuyasha, let me explain!" when it should have been "Kagome, let me explain!" Other than that, the whole story is working out quite well. If you need any help with minor editing, let me know. I'm a fairly decent person when it comes to being an editor.
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 22:51 CDT
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wow i never knew kagome had it in her well i can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: OreoGirl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 21:09 CDT
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I love the story but they're ! after every sentence
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your Story!!! Thanx For updating!!!
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Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 20:18 CDT
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OMG!!! R U trying to kill me??!!! ending an awesome chapter a such a big cliffhanger!!!!!! I hope they fight! :) You HAVE to update ASAP!!!!!!! (Sorry im mad)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 20:08 CDT
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read this sentence "How was the party sweetie?" Inuyasha said and kissed Sessh's cheek. LOL!!!!! It's from your story. There's something wrong there :) I love the story though!!! Thanx 4 updating!!!
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice.update soon PLZ!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 06:15 CDT
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Wow I'm late for reading this! But that's what happens when you're gone for a week and a half with no internet or oither computer. But the chapter was quite interesting, even thougth I can't remember what happened earlier in the story =D But update again, I'll be at home next time!
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Title: Kimberly
Reviewed By: inuyashafanfictionlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this whole story it is so awsome i want to find out what happenes plz update more plzplzplz thankyou
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 17:43 CDT
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sorry i didnt review... or maybe i did i dont remember. anyways i totally love this fic! its awesomely awesome!grammer and spelling arent that great buts its still awesome! i cant wait for you to update! keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 15:29 CDT
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IM SORRY I DIDN'T REVIEW!!!!!!!!!1 i have been doing alot of of things for school so i didn't get to read till today!!!! i love your story!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this fic is awesome! this is so going in my favorites! update soon please! there are a couple of mistakes, but they are minor, plus, i was a bit shocked at how sessh also wanted to have kagome, and kouga acted like he didn't care, except for when inuyasha 'cheated' on her. anyways, this fic is awesome and among the best (in my opinion) please continue! :D
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 00:53 CDT
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omg...drama drama drama! lol! anyways...can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 19:03 CDT
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yay update soon!!!!!!!!! i cant wait to know how there relationship works out ahhhh!!!! temptation!!!!! it burns.....it burns!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!! i loved it finally koga does something that means he likes kagome lol update soon please
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Reviewed By: Makala On: August 06, 2007 19:00 CDT
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I just finished the last chapter and that's the type of drama I wanted.But to be honest If you had Inuyasha and Kagome hate each other from the beginning and their love blossom from there it would've been alot better
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