| "Small Town Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: Small Town Dreams
Reviewed By: Makala On: August 06, 2007 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the story and creativity and making Fluffy liking Kagome was good but try adding a little more drama to it. But other than that I'm hooked
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
instead of kouga liking Kagome Sesshoumaru deos?well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!please update soon.
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 04:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha...how cute! his family is funny! lol...anyways...keep up the great work and can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, Cute Chappie Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they got together!yay!they kissed!update soon.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 23:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it i can't wait for the next chapters!!!! i love the fact both kagome's and inuyasha's families are tring to hook them up its kinda funny you should write what happenes the next morning and make like something embarrassing happen like kagome snors or inuyasha drools something like that lol love your work!!!! kepp at it!!!!update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 17:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it. though i think inu and sess smile to much. actually sess shouldnt smile at all. good anyway -mikoofdoom
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter.update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lovely! I find it funny how Inu's family are all trying to hook up Kags & Inu (minus Sess... he likes her! *giggles*)
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!!!!! keep writing !!!!!! i'll be waiting for the next chapter!!!!!
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Title: Good Job!!!!!!!1
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved your story Keep writing!!1
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it.but, this time, please don't take another 4 months to update again.no offense or anything.
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Reviewed By: heatheredgley On: July 15, 2007 20:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it alot . . .. keep updating please:)
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Reviewed By: CareeCypher [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry for the few missing letters in my review, my keyboard is dying.
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