| "Small Town Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 12:16 CST
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Great story! Who's the girl? It was very well written, and descriptive. I'd like to see more of Kikyo and Naraku stirring up trouble with the happy couple as well as Koga getting involved as well. Other then that, this is still a really good story.
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 17:38 CDT
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ooh! i loved it! thanks for the update^^ i dont know if you already have an idea, but i came up with this while i was reading, and think its pretty good. you obviousley dont have to use it, but its just an idea and stuff you sai naraku looked a bit familiar to kagome, so maybe since hes the mayors son and all he threw a party and kagome went with sango and stuff and then naraku tried to rape her or something, and he thinks that she likes him or something....its drama and all, but thats what i was thinking....so yea.... i gotta do my civics homewok now. :'(
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 17:20 CDT
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wow i can't believe kags and kikyo and what is the secrect about kagome
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Reviewed By: weawong On: October 14, 2007 17:31 CDT
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OMG!i loved it
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... a bit of drama but glad everythings ok with one of the couples again... in the end though screams a fight... just wonder what will happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at end spot weird, but chapter nice.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: inuyashafanfictionlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg hurry up and update it plz i want to know hwat happens
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
good write more
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed your story, and eagerly await the next chapters. I would like to say that some of the grammatical errors are just in the use of the wrong word or it's misspelled like pourpise should be purpose. I've also noticed that some times the wrong words have been used, such as when Kagome saw Inuyasha/Kikyo kiss it has Inuyasha yelling, "Inuyasha, let me explain!" when it should have been "Kagome, let me explain!" Other than that, the whole story is working out quite well. If you need any help with minor editing, let me know. I'm a fairly decent person when it comes to being an editor.
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 22:51 CDT
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wow i never knew kagome had it in her well i can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: OreoGirl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 21:09 CDT
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I love the story but they're ! after every sentence
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your Story!!! Thanx For updating!!!
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Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 20:18 CDT
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OMG!!! R U trying to kill me??!!! ending an awesome chapter a such a big cliffhanger!!!!!! I hope they fight! :) You HAVE to update ASAP!!!!!!! (Sorry im mad)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 20:08 CDT
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read this sentence "How was the party sweetie?" Inuyasha said and kissed Sessh's cheek. LOL!!!!! It's from your story. There's something wrong there :) I love the story though!!! Thanx 4 updating!!!
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