Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad story and actually a neat original plotline, but the writing sems to flow like a creeks meandering down a valley,. I hope that improves cause this is a neat idea, just match it up with a better stotytelling. dennisud
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