Title: from RAF Reviewed By:CalabreseCult [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 03:12 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I love it! The build-up was quite fantastic. sort of how one could wait for such a climax for themselves. especially the whole 'he's making love to me, not blatantly oofing me' part. the only thing i don't like is seshie's ONLY line. it was so cheesy and needlessly long. I wouldve had him say something along the lines of "I dare you to say that again." And after the orgasm. But well done, RAF seal of approval!
