| "Konna Ni Chikaku De..." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: sas/ita/nart
Reviewed By: jennifer polite On: August 26, 2010 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the i love the min chap u had for sas/itache/naruto that one is great please finch it to a complet story i whant to know what happens next
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Title: Selfish Redone
Reviewed By: Miko Vampire On: June 25, 2010 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Selfish redone alot better than the original, not only did Naruto prove that he could be strong and make a life for himself and his child but Itachi learned from his mistake and made up for it by telling the world about him and Naru, also I love the ending. But if that had been me I would've been ticked not cause of the couch but because they didn't tape what they did!!! LONG LIVE YAOI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KiraShichiyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to write another one! These are amazing, even the ones that you say are crap! Their better than i could ever write!
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Reviewed By: AQEE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2010 05:22 CST
Comment/Review:
i have just read Selfish can you plez writ another part whith a happy ending
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Reviewed By: starlightkitty200 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great writing!!!! btw can u please do a sai/naruto pairing theyre one of my favs keep up the good work!!!!!
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 18:06 CDT
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NUU! Stupid family members XP I guess I'll have to be unhappy for as long as it takes for you to get a new computer/get the old one fixed. Viruses suck. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Hurry XDD
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naruto's so hawt in the second chapter XD Sorry about my last review, I wrote it for the first chapter and didn't see there were more chapters after it ^_^ drr me. Anywho, yea. The second chapter was great. And I'll keep reading the next ones as soon as I'm done typing this :D
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Sasuke's such a bad guy! And I don't blame Naruto for walking out on him. Sasuke's a jerk anyhow ~_~. I thought it was great, and there were tons of passionate moments where everyone's yelling and such... And I feel like I've heard the "happy endings are only for unfinished stories" thing somewhere else before. Hmm.. Could just be me. Anyway, please write about another pairing again soon!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 15:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
good chapters. i think the ita/sasu one should turn into a mini series. it would be really good. could u possibly write an ita/naru for me? i cant find all that many 2 read. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: i love shino! On: May 11, 2007 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... I freakin love that. And I was wondering... If you could do me a really big, huge favor...Could you please... Maybe possibly write a Nauto/Shino fanfic. I would sooooo love you forever. Please!!!
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Title: rating ^^
Reviewed By: Kary Asakura and Mimi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this is good, lose the poety and music stuff.....But its a Y not graphic enoph for an X .... its hot it made me hot...but more graphic please!! Ill help if you want >.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 20:39 CDT
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i can just imagine how fuckable naruto would look in an outfit lyk that. lol. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is very good. i cant wait for some more one-shots in this story. update soon plz.
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