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| "Purely Physical" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: chezaswolf666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 20:23 CDT
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omg!! UPDATE!!! *sigh*..i have nothing to read right now, and this is addicting!!! (sometimes i think fanfics are even better and more addictive than drugs XD lol)
| Reviewed By: Magami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 11:18 CDT
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I like this story. The slight twists are just enough to keep the readers anticipating more, while all the while knowing that they must see to it to find the solution of this devastatingly sweet plot. Delicious really, and I hope you might continue soon?seems the story has been rather lifeless for a span of time.
| Reviewed By: Tokgabi On: February 21, 2008 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too rushed; the pacing is really quite good, whether you meant that to be intentional or not. I also like the plot, and I kind of consider it one - it's a problem, anyway. But I would like some jealousy between Sai and Kakashi . . . ^ ^;
| Reviewed By: CC On: April 26, 2007 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really cute! I like the way you've portrayed all the characters here. Sai is a bit dysfunctional and closed off, but not an unemotional robot- he isn't used to dealing with feelings yet, and it shows. Sakura hasn't appeared much this chapter, but if she's anything like she was in your last story, I have good expectations. It's also nice to see Kakashi doing the checking out for a change, instead of Sakura. And Naruto isn't too stupid that he can't notice something that's right in front of him (now, anyways). Great work, can't wait to see where you go with this fic :)
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