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| "Dreaming" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 21:56 CDT
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interesting, one expects her to begin bleeding from her side pretty soon for no known reason, the wound looking ragged like it was done by a large predator. . . i really don't know how you are going to go about this and if inuyasha will show up or not. a series of comas without the common muscle atrophy instead with unexplainable tan, callouses, muscle growth and injuries? she really believes she travels to another time that she only confides to her family and swears them to secrecy... she would be committed in a heartbeat. . . this is quite compelling and i would like to read more. ~ thank you, ginny
| Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 10:14 CDT
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i like this story. From Souta;s point of view is something different. try to make you chapters longer please.
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