Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your fic is coming along very nicely so far, but if i'd like to suggest that you indent when a new quotation starts. It's not only proper grammar, it'll make the text easier to understand, like who's saying what and if it's the same person. But it seems like it'll be a good fic, so keep it up. I'll be lookin foward to your update!
Cheers,
~``~Cherry~``~ |
