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| "Something More" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Something More
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hawt!! That pairing or Malik with any of the Bakurae is just too much searing lemony goodness for one page. LOL Awesome!!! If you are still into Yugioh at all, check out It Was over on : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4491619/1/It_Was_Over_Part_1
| Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, most of the best yaoi fanfic writers are female.
| Reviewed By: notsignedin On: April 09, 2007 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought the first part wasn't bad, but didn't interest me all that much, but the parts near and at the end were very, very good. I loved all the emotion you put into it. It wasn't so much that the emotions were overwhelming, but what was happening the between the two boys and the bond that was being built and how you portrayed that was beautiful in a subtle, but nonetheless noticeable manner. Kudos.
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