| "Yozora" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 18:50 CDT
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Sigh, if Kagome knows the truth, why does she want to go home,hmmm, well I guess she still needs time to adjust her thoughts. I really feel bad for Inuyasha, he just can't seem to catch a break anywhere. He has so many people he cares about and needs to protect, now he has a daughter to add to the bunch who seems to keep getting hurt no matter what he does. The woman he used to love wants him dead and the woman he loves now doesn't trust him enough or gives him the time to listen besides the fact that his crew is giving him the evil eye too for Kagome. GEEZ, please give him a break soon or I think he'll have the first hanyou mental breakdown. Please update soon, with a longer chapter, smile.
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. i love this fic so u have to update. plz i beg u i have waited long for a new chappie and want a another one too
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this was sooo KAWAII. i like it. no, really i like it so you have to write more soon. goodbye, stupid Kikyo
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 05:22 CDT
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AAAACKKKKK,You know I'm greedy,more I say, more (smile). Happy Memorial Weekend.
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 15:49 CDT
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this is such a cute story! i love it!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 23:47 CDT
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WELL,who the hell ruffled your feathers,mad much (smile). Don't sweat it, the story is moving on just fine and regardless of what, if the readers truly love the story,they'll stick it out. Thanks from the bottom of my heart for the talk father and daughter had about Kagome and for Kagome eavesdropping and learning what effect her command has, a little humility never hurt anybody. Yozura is still just a frightened child and confused child and who wouldn't be after what she's been through, she's tough,she'll make it. That scene between Kagome and Inuyasha was sweet and I didn't expect her to take off the beads what a nice gesture of good faith and trust. Inuyasha's refusal to let them go and her changing the spell on them awwwww, what's meant to be. KIKYO, was wondering when that wet blanket was going to make an appearance,wonder what she's got to say now, I'm sure it's full of POSITIVITY(smile). Can't wait for your next chapter,read ya later.
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hah so he have some feelings after all. well i hope u will update again soon. now I am going to bed its 2 o'clock in the night. update soon and tell me that kagome and yozora will become friends plz
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 13:33 CDT
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i like it, update soon.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 02:56 CDT
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I am glad that you are taking your time and developing the story. It is going to be an awesome read!! I can't wait for Yozora to adore Kagome and then destroy Kikyo somehow. The last part may be wishful thinking on my part. I am now a reader of yours for life!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 18:29 CDT
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Please tell me that the kid doesn't hate Kagome forever. It is really kind of depressing to think that she will. At least I can hope that she will change her mind and they become a family!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 00:42 CDT
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Hey,even if you don't get the reviews you so richly deserve, be sure that you have a fan in me. I like how Inuyasha is showing his softer side, it's cute. However, I still hope that you'll allow him and Shippo some time, I feel so bad for the kitsune. He needs a father figure too, and what of Kagome, will her and the little one that has stolen Inu's heart ever get close? Well until next time, Happy Writing.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 19:15 CDT
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very nice story... hope you update soon to see how the relationships between Kagome, Inuyasha, Yozora & Shippou will be... also what Sesshomaru will say... Update soon please...
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Reviewed By: Shiguresan (Author of 'Smoke') ^_^ On: April 30, 2007 08:27 CDT
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I stumbled upon this and I saw your username and thought 'i need to see what her writing is like'. you're always reviewing my fics so i thought I'd read yours ^_^ sounds like Inuyasha is behaving a little differently tan how he behaved in Smoke though ^_^ Guess we both like the Inuyasha as a daddy thing ^_^ BTW, sequel to smoke should be up soon. This story is good, i enjoyed it alot! -- Shigure-san xchuux
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very nice story,keep up the good work. I'm okay with Yozora,kids can be really picky with who they'll let get close to them. I hope she eventually will warm up to Kagome. I'm glad Inuyasha finally told Kagome about how he feels about that "SIT" command, she deserved it, she can be a little indifferent to his pain at times. Poor Shippou, I feel bad for him, I hope in later chapters you'll allow for him and Inuyasha to have a man to man talk. Well excited about the story so update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuKiKei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 04:23 CDT
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This was such a cute chapter, I think your pace is better now...more in e-mail, but I wanted to leave a review :-)
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