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Reviewed By: Keldrena On: July 06, 2008 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. I like how you had Yozora not like Kagome at first, a lot of authors wouldn't have done that, but I this case, it makes sense. Keep writing, please.
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Reviewed By: Kagome37 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:24 CDT
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I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. One of my favorite things you wrote was in the beginning of this fic where Inuyasha was forced to become a foster father with a mark.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I am glad that you just recently updated so I could find it. Please keep the updates coming, I can't wait to see how it ends. Kikyo is showing a definite evil streak to contemplate killing a child, no matter that the child hurt her.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 02:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that inuyasha & shippo will get along now... now inuyasha has two kids... wonder what shippo & yozora will do to get kagome & inuyasha together... hope you write more on inuyasha & kagome next... hope they overcome whatever comes their way... especially with what kikyo is planning... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: nice story
Reviewed By: adamilej On: November 26, 2007 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a nice story and so different from the usual fanfiction stories. I really like it cause it shows Inuyasha's strength as a parent and his soft side as well. Please post soon. J
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... finally inuyasha talked with shippo... now at least some things are clear between them... now what about kagome?... and shippo's plan - will yozora go with it or not... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GASP* You updated!!!!! Yay!! *DANCES AROUND* It was sorta short, but at least it's anything at all... Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... kinda short but glad to know how everyone is doing... hopefully inuyasha will have figured things out already by the time kagome comes back... also when will yozora warm up to kagome and the others... it can't just be inuyasha all the time... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great story so far... i can understand that inuyasha is seriously trying to take care of yozora as best he can... but i think he's forgetting that yozora and him are not the only ones in his group or pack... hope he realizes this... hope the others say something also... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: July 31, 2007 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, So far I love this story, you have some great ideas and good writing style, I anticipate each chapter and have yet to be disappointed. I know how difficult writers block and loss of inspiration can be, sometimes you just have to step away and reset. Either way I'm still anticipating the next chap, which I know won't disappoint! Good luck with your muse and try not to keep us waiting too long. ;-)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 20:36 CDT
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good chapter update... but kinda sad that Inuyasha is oblivious to almost everything around him except for Yozora... hopefully he won't be too blind... looking forward to your upcoming chapters... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isn't it strange? Miroku and Sango expect other demons to act different than humans but they always expect Inuyasha to act human! Maybe that says something about how much they accept him, that they forget that he is half demon. Or, they are just as dumb as they think he is. Great chapter, by the way. Look forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 01:52 CDT
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good chapter update... the story is coming along... but i feel sad for Shippo... seems like something bad is going to happen... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 19:26 CDT
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Poor Shippo, I feel so bad for him, Inuyasha is really now his only father figure and he doesn't even realize it. Although Kagome is at fault too for spoiling Shippo rotten but Shippo took full advantage of being the baby in the group and not trying to assert any maturity. I hope Sango and Miroku talk to Inu soon about Shippo's jealousy or it might get real ugly. Well great chapter, read ya soon.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: June 04, 2007 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read both chapters of your stories. You are quite good. I think that both are well written though I have to admit I think that there is no way that Kagome would ever call Inuyasha a filthy Hanyou. Still, its your story and you're doing a great job with it. Unrelated note- You would probably get along really well with my daughter. She has Okami and is beating it and is a HUGE Kingdom Hearts fan. Her favorite character is Riku, though she really likes Sora, too. She's beaten both games (including Sephiroth and that was a badass fight). Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next chapters. Later, Fyrloche.
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