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Title: nice story
Reviewed By: adamilej On: November 26, 2007 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a nice story and so different from the usual fanfiction stories. I really like it cause it shows Inuyasha's strength as a parent and his soft side as well. Please post soon. J
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... finally inuyasha talked with shippo... now at least some things are clear between them... now what about kagome?... and shippo's plan - will yozora go with it or not... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GASP* You updated!!!!! Yay!! *DANCES AROUND* It was sorta short, but at least it's anything at all... Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... kinda short but glad to know how everyone is doing... hopefully inuyasha will have figured things out already by the time kagome comes back... also when will yozora warm up to kagome and the others... it can't just be inuyasha all the time... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great story so far... i can understand that inuyasha is seriously trying to take care of yozora as best he can... but i think he's forgetting that yozora and him are not the only ones in his group or pack... hope he realizes this... hope the others say something also... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: July 31, 2007 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, So far I love this story, you have some great ideas and good writing style, I anticipate each chapter and have yet to be disappointed. I know how difficult writers block and loss of inspiration can be, sometimes you just have to step away and reset. Either way I'm still anticipating the next chap, which I know won't disappoint! Good luck with your muse and try not to keep us waiting too long. ;-)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 20:36 CDT
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good chapter update... but kinda sad that Inuyasha is oblivious to almost everything around him except for Yozora... hopefully he won't be too blind... looking forward to your upcoming chapters... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isn't it strange? Miroku and Sango expect other demons to act different than humans but they always expect Inuyasha to act human! Maybe that says something about how much they accept him, that they forget that he is half demon. Or, they are just as dumb as they think he is. Great chapter, by the way. Look forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 01:52 CDT
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good chapter update... the story is coming along... but i feel sad for Shippo... seems like something bad is going to happen... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 19:26 CDT
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Poor Shippo, I feel so bad for him, Inuyasha is really now his only father figure and he doesn't even realize it. Although Kagome is at fault too for spoiling Shippo rotten but Shippo took full advantage of being the baby in the group and not trying to assert any maturity. I hope Sango and Miroku talk to Inu soon about Shippo's jealousy or it might get real ugly. Well great chapter, read ya soon.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: June 04, 2007 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read both chapters of your stories. You are quite good. I think that both are well written though I have to admit I think that there is no way that Kagome would ever call Inuyasha a filthy Hanyou. Still, its your story and you're doing a great job with it. Unrelated note- You would probably get along really well with my daughter. She has Okami and is beating it and is a HUGE Kingdom Hearts fan. Her favorite character is Riku, though she really likes Sora, too. She's beaten both games (including Sephiroth and that was a badass fight). Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next chapters. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 18:50 CDT
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Sigh, if Kagome knows the truth, why does she want to go home,hmmm, well I guess she still needs time to adjust her thoughts. I really feel bad for Inuyasha, he just can't seem to catch a break anywhere. He has so many people he cares about and needs to protect, now he has a daughter to add to the bunch who seems to keep getting hurt no matter what he does. The woman he used to love wants him dead and the woman he loves now doesn't trust him enough or gives him the time to listen besides the fact that his crew is giving him the evil eye too for Kagome. GEEZ, please give him a break soon or I think he'll have the first hanyou mental breakdown. Please update soon, with a longer chapter, smile.
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. i love this fic so u have to update. plz i beg u i have waited long for a new chappie and want a another one too
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this was sooo KAWAII. i like it. no, really i like it so you have to write more soon. goodbye, stupid Kikyo
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 05:22 CDT
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AAAACKKKKK,You know I'm greedy,more I say, more (smile). Happy Memorial Weekend.
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