| "Soccer Mom" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great. The second chapter was really cute, with all the blushing. :) Keep writing. ;D
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Reviewed By: Sailor Mars3 On: August 23, 2007 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool,please write another chapter.The story sounds good so far!
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Reviewed By: star2bcaught [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA SHIP-DIP That reminds me of dip shit, imagine if kagome caught inuyahsa calling shippou that!
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Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep writing
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Reviewed By: morwen re not logged in On: April 12, 2007 10:24 CDT
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great story, even if it is a bit confusing right now. i have a feeling things will be cleared up in the next chapter or so. please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 23:00 CDT
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Your story is very nice, it just needs a bit of adjusting with the sentencing and it's perfect. Can't wait to read more, update soon.
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: April 11, 2007 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute ^.^ Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: inuloverinthepast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sounds good write more and we'll see if it'll stay good hopefully it does can't wait for more plz write more chappies :) Ja ne
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Reviewed By: black flame kitt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write another chapter soon this story seems very good and i would like to read more of it
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz continue
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Title: I love this fic
Reviewed By: XxRuler_of_the_DarknessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 09:50 CDT
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OMG!!! I totally LOVE! this story Update please!!!
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