"White Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Ren Tao [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 00:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update I really want to read more and it's really good one of the few good fanfictions out there, I don't want to sound mean but some fanfictions are sometimes not interesting but yours is and I love it so Please update ok. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Ren Tao [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 00:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update I really want to read more and it's really good one of the few good fanfictions out there, I don't want to sound mean but some fanfictions are sometimes not interesting but yours is and I love it so Please update ok. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Ren Tao [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 00:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update I really want to read more and it's really good one of the few good fanfictions out there, I don't want to sound mean but some fanfictions are sometimes not interesting but yours is and I love it so Please update ok. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 12:48 CST Comment/Review: Ya know, if you need help with dueling strategies, I'd be willing to help you out. I'm a self-proclaimed master of strategies for the anime duelists. Just let me know if you need anything. If you need any convincing, check my profile and read "The Darkness of Destiny", it's chock-full of dueling mumbo-jumbo :p.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 11:51 CDT Comment/Review: Woot!!! Wonderful update-y-ness stuff there. Hoping for more ASAP!!!!
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Title: Longer chapter Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 12:32 CDT Comment/Review: Except for needing to be a longer chapter it was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Jaden×Alexis On: August 16, 2007 11:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a very good !!! Keep up good work.
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Title: nice Reviewed By: hotre On: June 29, 2007 21:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: One of the more interesting stories out there. Keep it going.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 10:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ah, finally found it!!!! This is getting good . . . A few grammaticl and spelling errors here and there, but otherwise quite enjoyable and a wonderful read that's got me laughing and wanting more. See you next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 15:56 CDT Comment/Review: I like the chapter, keep up good work. Atticus wanting Alexis to get with Jaden instead of Chazz was cute. I messaged you with some ideas for the two girls for Bastion.
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 20:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THAT WAS COOL!! I love what you're doing with Bastion. Love the way Alexis acted. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 10:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: So you're now posting your fics here too, cool. The only reason I gave a 9 in the rating is because Bastion hasn't shown up yet. ^_^ But you know I like this fic, I told you when I read it on ff.net.
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