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| "Whatever It Takes" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 14:27 EDT
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Really nice chapter, again. And, of course is kindda sad Vegeta is going through some hard times, but I wasn't disappointed at all, I'm just wanting to read more. He,he, can hardly wait to see (I mean, read) Bulma's face when she sees what Vegeta has done. Will be priceless. So, looking forward!! Big hugs and read you soon! | Reviewed By: Kaiya99999 On: July 07, 2011 18:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I saw you posted another chapter! and it did not disappoint. :) looking forward to the next update!! | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2011 01:13 EDT
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Great chapter! Things ARE really changing. I hope Bulma's mind starts changing too. I like Vegeta's reactions to all the women fawning over him and it's nice to see Bulma jealous for a change. She had better act fast before he decides to give up on her. haha Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter! | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 02:32 EST
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I really loved this chapter. I'm way late but I had to catch up again. I hope Bulma can finally ditch Hiroshi soon. Although, with her stubbornness I can see it going all the way to the alter before she realizes how dumb she's being. haha. Vegeta is so sweet declaring his love for her and taking her blows even when he doesn't deserve them. Poor thing. I really hope you continue this fic. I've been following it since you first posted and, while I'm not always the best at posting comments, I'd really hate to see such a great fic go unfinished. I really hope you can find it in you to keep going because it is truly an original and moving story that likes to frustrate me and make me cry at the same time; but I stick with those stories because they have the best pay offs. Keep up the great work! I look forward to the next chapter! | Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 17:29 EDT
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Awww! He said he wants to have more children? I guess that really gave Bulma something to think about. And I´m glad Vegeta is handling all the situations so well; I think being so patient would be a very difficult thing for him. And, I really can´t wait for Bulma to find out what kind of jerk that Hiroshi person is!! Lovely chapter, thank you for another beautiful update. I hope you get lots of reviews!! :D
| Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 19:48 EDT
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Hi. Well, first of all, thank you for updating. Don't feel bad for taking your time, we know our wait will be rewarded with a long, emotional and exciting chapter. About this one: Hmmmm. I don't think anyone expected a Bulma from the future, but it was a very clever way to adress de infamous virus thing, as well as to help the Bulma-Vegeta predicament to move to the next stage. I have to admire your ability to mess with time and time-lines and making sure it will be perfectly understandable for the reader. Again, this was a very emotional and enjoyable chapter, I'm looking forward to your next update.
| Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! An update! I look forward to these. I really love this fic and I thank you for continuing to update it. :) I hope Bulma gets rid of Hiroshi soon. He's been such a jerk. He needs to be sent off with a blast. ;) I liked the twist with future Bulma coming to visit. I honestly hadn't expected it but it was nice. I hope this fic will also eventually bring Trunks back to life... after Bulma is pregnant with him of course. Either way, I completely support this fic and I can't wait for chapter 21!! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2010 01:32 EST
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Hey! Sorry I didn't review earlier; I just came back from a long, nice and exhausting vacation. It was very nice, but then I had to catch up with my reading. And, thank you soooo much for dedicating the chapter to me!!!! I am really flattered, and moved, and extremely happy! It is so very kind of you. And I loved the chapter, by the way. Vegeta really has gone a long way; he is evolving and starting to show sides of him that no one knew he had. These traits add complexity to the character, and that's just wonderful. I didn't really think he could be able to save the life of Anya's mother, but it seems to be a nice turn. Although, I'm not sure of how the changes in the past will affect the future, I mean, it seems like Anya of the future doesn't remember her mother. Is that because she came from a different timeline, and her past won't undergo changes caused by the developments of this other timeline? If this is the case, baby Anya will have an entirely different life than the Anya of an alternative future, and nothing that happens in her life will influence on the life of grown-up Anya. I didn't go into these matters with baby Vegeta, because I his present life as a baby is not that different from how it was for grown-up Geta in his time, so there was no reason for him to change his memories. Anyway, I hope I'm not being too confusing (my head is spinning!!), I guess I'm just trying to figure it out while I wait 'till you finish the next chapter. Great work, as always, and thank you again. Big hugs! :D
| Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 10:28 EST
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Ok, Vegeta dancing... I didn't see that coming! LOL! So, you want us to guess what happens next... I sort of see Bulma likes her boyfrend 'what´s-his-name' less every time. Good! Besides that, it seems like Vegeta is planning a travel to see Anya's dad... Oh-my-God-oh-my-God! Is Bulma coming with him? Hmm...It could be fun but I don't think that's gonna happen. Let me guess again... what about this: Vegeta will go through all this trouble to get Anya's dad and Bulma will finally notice how deep is his change, and will be moved by his actions, and they will make up! (ok, maybe this is too simple, but at least she will feel moved). Well, this is my guess, independently from whether Vegeta gets badly injured in the process or not. So, this is my guess. Looking forward to see what really happens! :D
| Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2009 19:42 EST
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Great chapter!! It's so much torture to see this feud between Bulma and Vegeta but I know (or hope) that when they get back together it'll be a great moment! I hope you get to the chapters when Trunks is born! I'd like to see him be brought back to life like Anya! Keep the updates coming! I absolutely love this story!
| Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 23:35 EDT
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So I managed to make my eyes go bleary catching up to the 14 chapters of this fic in one afternoon. It was well worth it. I love the development which you have put into each of the characters to make it so plausible that this is the way that they would act in this type of situation ( Bunny especially. Her outburst was so fulfilling). Vegeta's depression and despair seems so real. I also have enjoyed the fact that you have realistically melded a lot of canon moments, like Vegeta's first return to earth after leaving to find Goku and the barbeque. You managed to keep the dialogue and still make it work in an AU universe. I am still puzzled as to Yoshiwhashisface...I'm of the Vegeta train of thought when it comes to him. I don't even care to memorise his name. I cannot wait until you've updated again and I also wanted to thank your husband for all his hard work. He seems to be a good guide.
| Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 12:02 EDT
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OMG this chapter (Chapter 13) was absolute torture. It was written well, don't get me wrong, but I, like yourself, am hard core B&V and I really had to force myself to read it because it hurt so bad. Bulma is being such a bitch! She needs to be brought down a few notches because Vegeta is truly sacrificing everything that he is to be civil and make things up with her. Also, Trunks needs to be in the picture so... yeah. Bulma needs to stop being a bitch. lol I like that Bulma's parents have so much more involvement in this one compared to other fanfics I've read. It's nice. :) I love the story so far and hopefully Bulma and Vegeta will get back together soon? I'll def. keep reading! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: sue On: June 14, 2009 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Please update soon! I love your imagination.
| Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 21:06 EST
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"What is this 'badonkadonk butt' of which you speak?" LOl that has got to be one of the funniest quotes ever in fanfiction, considering who it's coming from. I would have been like one of those office hoochies, flailing over the "dark-eyed hottie" and attempting to lure him with food. Damn Bulma. She is just too lucky isn't she. Great job. The formatting sometimes wasn't grouped in paragraphs but it was easily overlooked. ;)
| Title: It's Me
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read the first two chapters so far and I gotta say, I've been enjoying myself like you have no idea!! You can guess I am rather difficult to please when it comes to he whole BV interaction but this??? It is so refreshing and funny and enjoyable. I was laughing in different parts, genuinely amused by the dialogue. You've managed to recreate that same spirit Tina Lang infused "Vegeta's Lesson" with. Excellent job. Chapter 2 is just brilliant.
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