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| "Whatever It Takes" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 23:35 EDT
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So I managed to make my eyes go bleary catching up to the 14 chapters of this fic in one afternoon. It was well worth it. I love the development which you have put into each of the characters to make it so plausible that this is the way that they would act in this type of situation ( Bunny especially. Her outburst was so fulfilling). Vegeta's depression and despair seems so real. I also have enjoyed the fact that you have realistically melded a lot of canon moments, like Vegeta's first return to earth after leaving to find Goku and the barbeque. You managed to keep the dialogue and still make it work in an AU universe. I am still puzzled as to Yoshiwhashisface...I'm of the Vegeta train of thought when it comes to him. I don't even care to memorise his name. I cannot wait until you've updated again and I also wanted to thank your husband for all his hard work. He seems to be a good guide.
| Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 12:02 EDT
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OMG this chapter (Chapter 13) was absolute torture. It was written well, don't get me wrong, but I, like yourself, am hard core B&V and I really had to force myself to read it because it hurt so bad. Bulma is being such a bitch! She needs to be brought down a few notches because Vegeta is truly sacrificing everything that he is to be civil and make things up with her. Also, Trunks needs to be in the picture so... yeah. Bulma needs to stop being a bitch. lol I like that Bulma's parents have so much more involvement in this one compared to other fanfics I've read. It's nice. :) I love the story so far and hopefully Bulma and Vegeta will get back together soon? I'll def. keep reading! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: sue On: June 14, 2009 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Please update soon! I love your imagination.
| Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 21:06 EST
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"What is this 'badonkadonk butt' of which you speak?" LOl that has got to be one of the funniest quotes ever in fanfiction, considering who it's coming from. I would have been like one of those office hoochies, flailing over the "dark-eyed hottie" and attempting to lure him with food. Damn Bulma. She is just too lucky isn't she. Great job. The formatting sometimes wasn't grouped in paragraphs but it was easily overlooked. ;)
| Title: It's Me
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read the first two chapters so far and I gotta say, I've been enjoying myself like you have no idea!! You can guess I am rather difficult to please when it comes to he whole BV interaction but this??? It is so refreshing and funny and enjoyable. I was laughing in different parts, genuinely amused by the dialogue. You've managed to recreate that same spirit Tina Lang infused "Vegeta's Lesson" with. Excellent job. Chapter 2 is just brilliant.
| Reviewed By: starangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 05:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I was surprised by how good this was...I was expecting the usual boring AU that usually goes with a first story...and since it was the only story in your profile I assumed it was your first. I apoligize if that isn't the case. Very well done, the only complaint I have is that I prefer the Vejita spelling of 'Vegeta' for the reason that the nickname 'Gita' sounds better than 'Geta' which would be pronounced like: 'I want to GET A...' Just a personal preference. Other than that I found this to be a good read, can't wait to hear more from you in the near future! -Angelstar PS: I found you on DBZ Fanfic salon if you wanna look me up, I know a selfish plug but...I really couldn't help myself!
| Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey! Me again. Funny thing: this very morning I was thinking of your story, and how much I'd like to read a new chapter. And I was thrilled to find a new one posted. :D I missed you! Sorry about not guessing what was that Vegeta couldn't put his finger about. I really did give it a thought, but couldn't imagine it was his hair. Honestly, I thought it was a fact that his hair was black, at least that way it seemed to me. I figure I wasn't really putting too much attention. *sigh* Anyway… I loved this chapter. It's so nice to have Goku back; no one is as annoying to Vegeta as Goku. Wonderful! I also enjoy the way you have to gradually disclose Geta's past (I mean future), and how the pieces are taking its places. I'm glad Vegeta and Bulma made up, but good that you're keeping him in character, at least before everyone but his family. I find his softer, non-public, conflicted with himself, side quite accurate to the character. Is not the Vegeta we are used to see in the manga and anime, but is the one I'd like to imagine in his private time with his woman. And we know for a fact that the cannon Vegeta loved her and loved their family, even when we (the fans) had to wait a long time for him to acknowledge that, in his very Vegeta way, but he did. Ok, I wish you got more reviews, I truly believe you deserve to be reviewed. Please continue with the story, I'm looking forward!
| Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 23:19 EDT
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Very nice chapter, ingtriguing indeed! I couldn't stop reading. I hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 15:50 EDT
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Well, I'm so glad you updated. I enjoyed this chapter immensely, laughed so much… almost fell from my seat! Almost cried too. I always wondered what happened to Vegeta's mind when he went to space searching for Goku and didn't find him, since in the original storyline he and Bulma were not together yet (if I remember right?). I guess he came back to Earth just because he had nowhere else to go. All of this takes a different meaning in your story, now he really has a reason to come back. And the birth of this new baby leads to a lot of different options. This is so exciting, really. I hardly can wait to see what happens next. *^.^*
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Novablaster On: April 16, 2008 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a awesome story, I love the whole early Bulma and Vegeta get together thing. Please keep writing.
| Reviewed By: Birdman45 On: April 16, 2008 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: firebird234 On: April 16, 2008 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story, and I guess it's safe to say the kid ain't our Trunks since the little guy was practically bald and the baby has a full head of hair.
| Reviewed By: Vlade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 12:44 EDT
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Its a crime that you don't get more reviews for this, I am sure that it narrows down to people being too lazy to read a whole chapter. I happen to enjoy the length. Your story seems to have just the right amount of drama, not too over-bearing, and humor that fits just perfectly with the anime. The characters I felt were spot on flawless, and I happen to have really enjoyed your depiction of Vegeta. Your depiction of Bulma also seems to be uncanny, in a lot of stories Bulma is made out to be an emotional wreck with no backbone, something we can both agree she is most definitely not. You did a very good job interacting the two together, and I look forward to reading more of this story. Even though the time period seems quite different then the canon, something tells me I am going to soon see how much of an impact it will make. Best of Luck. -Vlade
| Title: Amusing!
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 02:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have to say I'm very surprised by the fact that you have only 1 review (with mine, it will be 2!). This is one of the most entertaining fanfictions I ever read. I think it was very funny and sweet. I liked specially the chapter when Vegeta eats the tree servings of stake, just to beat Goku's record. So hilarious!!! I think it was sooooo Vegeta, no one else has this unique mix of meanness and innocence. About his relationship with Bulma, I think Akira Toriyama left those mystery years with some propose in his genius mind. First of all, I guess he just wanted Trunks to be born. Bulma is a very important character in the story, for her son could not be just anyone's son. He has to be as capable of fighting as Goku's sons. It has no point, for the sake of the development of the story, to waste a lot of time in getting to the depths of how it happened to be (practical man, as I see him). So, the author seems to be kind enough to leave it to the imagination of the fandom, with just some slight glimpses and hints. I'm so glad he did, because I'm having so much fun reading B/V stories (but I'm quite picky, so I have not really followed a lot of them). And I like yours a lot, I don't mind the chapters are long. I like the fact that Vegeta is really messed up with his emotions. It really matches with the character, at least before the Buu saga (after said saga, he seemed to be more comfortable with his "family life"). Well, I just wanted to say that I like what you're doing, please keep with it. Looking forward to your next update!
| Reviewed By: justkizzmy On: February 22, 2008 05:19 EST
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I really like the fact that this was such a nice long chapter! I don't see too many stories with long chapters! And this story is not boring. You are doing a great job with it. You seem to have bulma and vegita personalities on target. I've read all the bulma and vegita stories and this one is one of the best I've read. Just wanted to let you know.
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