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| "What Are You?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O!!!!! NARAKU is so sweet! he loves SESSHOMARU so much. Please make a sequel! I want to know what its like to be raised by both NARAKU and SESSHOMARU.
| Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 23:35 CDT
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wooo they finally have names! well one of them! Awsome chapter!
| Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOO! You used my name! yey! Anyway greta chapter like allways. This is definetly the only story I cheak to see if its updated every single day. Keep up the exelent work. You seem to be having truble with male names so let me see if I can help you out: Tzuma, Tezuka, Ciruelo, Jilonmaru, Tannin or Fafnir. These arent my favborite names and I dont know what they mean but they sound like pretty strong names for a future lord. And these are pretty girl names too. I think: Medea, Sybaris and Melusine. Good luck in naming the twins. Baby naming is very hard.
| Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! This is sutch an original story. I was thinking about names and stuff and well for the girls I like these two. Cho = butterfly Shuarru = dont know what it means but I think its pretty =
| Reviewed By: liliesformary [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 09:16 CDT
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This reminds me of a fanfic I read once called "My Lady's Visage" by Baka-Desi (on FF.net). Though, I have to say, your prose isn't quite what hers is. And, while I find the idea and the pairing interesting, I think the story isn't quite there yet. Though, keep at it. Just be aware that there is a wide berth for revisions. I'm obviously interested enough to read it, and thus, leave a review. This isn't a flame, BTW, this is constructive critisism, though I'm sure you know the difference, some people do not. Anyway...some thoughts: Considering Sesshomaru's reasoning for dressing like a male deals with transgender issues, you may want to do a little more research in that arena. His/er attutude towards the whole thing seems more tomboyish than "I'm born in the wrong body." Also, there are a lot of psycological issues that go along with that. I don't know, it just doesn't feel well thought out, and I thing it's one of the most glaring problems in the plot and character development. Also, I don't know why you have two opposing storylines, but I wish you would pick one and focus on it. Either the romance or whatever else you had planned if Naraku stayed dead. Also, also, these chapters feel, considering how much they cover, like they could be a lot longer; generally more descriptive and more developmental for the characters. Finally, this is quite OOC in most places...(not just Sess. Inu and the gang and Naraku don't feel right at all)I think it may be interesting to keep it a little more IC, even with the drastic change to Sesshomaru. Well, good luck with this. At least it's something different.
| Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Tiegrsi On: May 05, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, I can't stand the idea of Sesshomaru being a female...However, for as much as I dislike the idea, I think your fic was extremely well written. It has a good plot with good reason and descriptions for the events and thoughts included. It also has to have been one of the most unique Inuyasha fanfics I have ever read. All in all, I have to congratulate you on a good story. You took an idea and made it work well enough to keep me reading the whole way through, even though it was an idea that did not appeal to me personally. Good job! :)
| Reviewed By: HelpfulBeauty On: April 22, 2007 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the more interesting and most original fanfics I've come across for a long time. The idea that Sesshomaru really was female, and that he should give birth to twins... I admit the sex with Naraku grossed me out, but I loved her cold logic... I was disappointed when it ended.
| Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story although i don't know why im getting into it this much...lol
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