| "The Bright Light Of Konoha" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: yumithebitch On: August 28, 2007 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
when u gonna update this story its real good i wat to read wat will happen
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far I like the story sad ok now when the hell will this story be updated I know you said you have stories on that crappy site FF.net sorry I hate that site since it won`t work for me well it will let me in but it won`t switch chapters for me and I e-mail them the support ppl and those bastards won`t reply so I am wondering were you going to update this story on this site because I would love to see what happens next
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: lionspride [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I really liked your story. Don't worry, Naruto's not OOC... Well, technically he is OOC, but... in a good way? Anyway, that doesn't matter. What does matter is that you post more! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ninjamaster_255 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
9 for grammer because i really wasnt paying attention so i dont know but that fact alone gets you a 10 if it doesnt trip me up you dont need to worry about it i love it the idea is great and i think it should be a naruhina keep up the good work and update soon and can you give us an idea of how often you will update please thx keep it up
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Reviewed By: narusaku_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you should make it a harem fic ^__^
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 22:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with spirit wolf. there are only like 1 fic of each of the pairings he listed.
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
looking forward to next chapter. XDD
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have an how bout pairing Naruto up with both Shizune and Kurenai or maybe just between them or even with Anko you hardy never see any of those pairing let alone all three at the same time lol thats just my opinion of pairings you could do
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