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| "Not So High And Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What did Miroku see that was interesting? I didn't get the end, it didn't make any sense. I had to read it 3 times before realizing you were saying that he got Kagome pregnant. You then were refering to I as Inuyasha was talking to himself. I didn't know that it was Shippo that was talking either until I reread it a few times. Other than that, I enjoyed the story.
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Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute!!! I like you ended it with Inuyasha saying he had a family again, it fit it perfectly!!! GREAT JOB!!! Ja ne!!!
| Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 18:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kawaii desu! Well, not the lemon, that was juicy, but the Shippo-Inuyasha scene in the end! I'd like some space in between for easier reading, but other than that, this is a gooooood one-shot. I do wonder however why Inuyasha wanted to wait until mating season and and what effects there'll be since he didn't... none, perhaps? Anyways, he's bound to be frustrated, finally having his mate and she toddlers off to help with something useless... seen from the point of view of a horny hanyou, that is. : ) Good job!
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