Reviewed By: Blue_goddess On: April 10, 2007 14:16 CDT Comment/Review: this story is getting off to a realy good start, can't wait to see where you are going to take this.
Reviewed By: shadowkado On: April 10, 2007 14:14 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: GREAT story i love the consept update it soon please and thank you