| "Fragments of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah what a joy to read this story has been! I am glad Sesshomaru might be starting to get it through his thick head that Kagome loves him and he should not be afraid to accept that love. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO YOU DIDN'T!!!!!!!!!! That was one hell of a cliff hangger! I just know you already have the next chapter ready! Update VERY soon!!!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 22:15 CST
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ah, in perfect takahashi style, the angst and the revelation. nice work! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww,THAT'S SOOO SWEET!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!....PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 17:37 CST
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AH! How dare you leave it at such a cliff hanger! Grahhh! I hate you! Not really but I really need to hear what happens next. So hurry up and write the next chapter, ne? Wonderful, really. Sesshomaru and Kagome are so cute!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 20:13 CDT
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Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!! That is so sad! How could Sesshomaru just leave her?!? I don't understand! Oh god this is gonna drive me crazy for ever!!! I love this story! I have never read a book where Kagome lost her memory! Very original. I just love this story! I don't know how many times I have said that but just know that I love your story! And your style of writing! Keep up the good work! Also please update soon! I am dying to read the rest and see how the story ends!!!
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...Sesshy sucks! Poor Kagome and after all that. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, that was good. Why in the hell did he leave! I hope you have more comming soon. I'm a little adicted here. lol. Great chapter! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 21:59 CDT
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very nicely done so far! I always like a kagome and sesshoumaru pairing better, something so much more mature about it all! Just slow down on the typing a little, i see just a few typos, but nothing that would ruin the meaning of the story. *i'm hyper-sensitive to grammar, being a language teacher* thanks! and keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome couldn't have died! Wah! Oh my, Sesshomaru is so cute! I cannot wait for him to win back Kagome.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. I hope you kill that asshole, Naraku. Make Sessh melt him slowly with acid or something. That would be cool. lol. I can't wait for the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprised I didn't see that coming. Of course Naraku would take advantage of Kagome's memory loss. Great chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's so cute. Sesshomaru and Kagome are simply adorable. I like how you did the whole story and everything. I cannot wait for the next update. =]
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. I'm glad you finally put up a new chapter. I makes me nervous. I can't help but feel like you stopped writing. Well, you're back so thanks for the new chapter.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I received about 7 e-mails yesterday. You have been very busy! I really liked this chapter. Everyone is so confused! I love it! Drama, drama, drama... I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww,i love this story!! the best one yet! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool. It's a little hard to read because it's all smushed together but I couldn't let that stop me. I can't even forsee what's in store for the characters in the next chapter. Sess will need to confront his own feelings and Kagome will need to get her memories back sooner or later. How will she feel when they come back to her? :rubs hands together evily: Hmmm...
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Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 13:18 CDT
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awesome update! I can't wait to see what happens when inuyasha finds out about the little fling and also what happens when kagome gets her full memory back..or if she does... Update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story please update it soon!
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad you decided to keep going with the story. I was afraid that you had forgotten about it. Thank you. Really great chapter. Keep um coming.
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason I put an 8 in style of writing is because it was really hard to read. Look it over and see if you can fix it. I hated to even give you an 8 because I am enjoying the story so much. I wonder what will happen to Kouga when he shows up to see Kagome. Bum bum bum... :dramatic music: Write more soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more I want more please.
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope to be able to read the next chapter very soon. I am enjoying the story very much.
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Reviewed By: Katie33h On: May 02, 2007 18:47 CDT
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thanks good start !
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice please update soon.
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