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Title: ch 22
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 09:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing, I have been reading this story non-stop I am completely hooked, i can't belief that twist you threw in chapter 22, I didn ot see that coming at all, but I love the added conflict it brings to the story. I also enjoy the pace you have set, you are letting things build naturally betwen the characters, well done on an excellent story. That bit where Inuyahsa was taking pictures made me laugh, the comedic timing was perfect for that lol |
Reviewed By: debs45 On: February 01, 2011 14:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can u hurry up update plz u take like 10 thousand years to update hurry up! thank you |
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 04:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DX update please! |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2010 19:56 PST
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OMG! Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. Poor Kagome! She has to remember him! She can't forget Inuyasha!!!! |
Reviewed By: kiydkat On: December 27, 2010 21:50 PST
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I love this story, I have been reading it non stop! Although I have to say as soon as I got to the "dazed and confused" chapter I basically skimmed through it. I really just wanted to read Kagomes POV and she wasn't in there once. I started to just not care about anyone else, so that was disappointing. |
Reviewed By: Sternenstaub [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2010 07:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey - you made my day! =) Still a little shaky after the consumption of your new chapter and the up and down of it. What a ride on a roller coaster it has been! But I've got the feeling that the stage is set - now we are waiting for the villain to arrive. Thank you for your Christmas gift and Happy Holidays! Sternenstaub |
Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2010 09:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH SHIT! Poor Kagome |
Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2010 13:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O I am so happy you updated! But please tell me Kagome hasnt forgotten Inu! That would just break my heart. Please update soon. Awesome chapter =) |
Reviewed By: Ravens_ashs09 On: December 12, 2010 17:50 PST
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Dang girl...when you update, you update...hehehe. I'm sorry to hear about the formatting. If they wont fix it, at least promise that you will insert a little A/N to let us know where to find he next chapter. I'm so ecstatic that Kagome finally woke up. I can't believe that Kikyo is still in this. I hope that Inuyasha reams her a new one. (Sorry to all those who like her but I am a self proclaimed Kikyo hater...hehehe). I can't wait for Inuyasha to come in and pull Kagome out of her breakdown. When you do angst, you do it full blast;-). Congrats on the stories as well. Update again soon. Many hugs. |
Reviewed By: nikki_nightmare On: December 12, 2010 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yesssss! its the update of the century!! i love you sooo much in this moment. i cant wait until you update again :) |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2010 05:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! Sorry about the formatting issues, but under the circumstances they didn't bother me in the slightest. I think you can post a rtf okay without issues. Hopefully MM will finish getting all their glitches cleared up sooner rather than later, but even if you decide to leave this site I will follow you to wherever in the universe you decide to finish this story. This chapter was wonderful. Ayame really should have known better, but I'm glad they were able to say enough to get Inuyasha to calm down and listen and neither she nor Hakkaku got seriously hurt. Poor Kagome, that 'waking up' scene was epic. But to be expected. I like that who is Takahashi-sama twist at the end there, but I'm sure Kagome will remember who Inuyasha as soon as she sees him and can snap out of her hysteria. The mental break down is perfectly acceptable, though, under the circumstances. Stormy weather indeed, I'm sure that will prove an exceedingly appropriate chapter title for the next installment. Really looking forward to it! Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2010 13:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! Yesh! And man, what an update- whew! Talk bout some wicked shit, gotta love it, hehe. Thank you so much for sharing! |
Title: OMGF
Reviewed By: Fallen606 On: December 11, 2010 12:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! So u know ive been waiting for this update and secretly stalking u because i absolutely love this story and then u give me one chapter that has me desperate to find out what the hell happens next. PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!! PUHLEASEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! UPDATE THIS SOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNN. Like u have no idea the anxiety ur story is giving me. like omg can we have 3 chapters as a christmas present. :sniff:sniff: i feel like a crack addict because u r just sooo damn goood. u r just so freaking awesome i could cry. PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!! UPDATE SOON. ok im done now. cant wait to see what you do next and dont quit this story bc i will probably die of disappointment. :) thanks for being awesome and keep up the good work. cant wait to read your novel i know it will be awesome. |
Title: Best Drama Cat.
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2010 18:23 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the Sept. 2010 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Sept%2 02010/?start=all All awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/gallery.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php **You may receive this notice more than once if you've won multiple awards. Again, Congratulations, and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Inuyashaloverr ^.~ Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Mystified Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2010 19:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats on the book! I just wanted to say that I do have a few of your stories on my favorites list, and by far this one is my favorite. I've been following this story for so long and I can't wait to see what happens! On days when I feel crappy, I read this story and it makes me feel better. This story is wonderful, and I can't wait for more! Wonderful job! :)
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