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Title: Cold ending
Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 24, 2010 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOW!!!!!!! I thought this chapter involving Kagome's "friend" was so cold and so well written I actually felt sorry for her. I do not know if Sess has his legendary sword on him in this story, but I think that's the only way they will get answers. I going to read your latest chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: fudge On: January 24, 2010 13:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is going to kill me!!! i hooope you update very soon, keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 13:32 PST
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Holy crap! That was so violent! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha. *sobs* I want Kouga dead. D-E-A-D, dead! *sobs again*
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Werewolf-lover On: January 24, 2010 13:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am crying my eyes out! This cannot be happening! They cannot die! But even if Kagome doesn't die, she's going to be in the hospital forever! She ingested so many drugs, the she probably got really bad chemical poisoning from all the bleach and cleaning products. Her skin is probably gone and there are so many infections! And the way she is beaten! If her blood splatters on the walls, that must mean she might have had some of her organs ruptured, maybe some head trauma. And now he's chocknig her? What if Kagome becomes a vegtable? I can't wait to know what happens. I love this story sooo sooo much, it's becoming my life. Please update soon!
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Title: Gaah!
Reviewed By: Zvaigzduuute On: January 24, 2010 12:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually check your story every day, if not a few times per day! Even tomorrow I will check, probably even later today! But I get so happy when you update! I love love love your story. I know Kagome probably won't die because you still have that Kikyo stuff to sort out! But still what will happen to her afterwards? Your story is amazing! I love it, love it, love it! Poor InuYasha =(. I love the whole thing with the mate thing how they can feel each other, and one dies for another. I usually hate the whole mate thing because it sounds so primitive and animalistic, but this is incorporated so well into the whole story! I cannot wait for you to update, please please please do it as soon as you can! I just can't wait for more, even if it's a little bit! Please please tell us what happens!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 11:28 PST
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=O!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!! I "accidentally" read some of the ending and wthhh!! SHE CAN'T JUST DIE!! ARNT U A BELIEVER IN HEA?? PLEASEE TELL ME U R! SMHH HOPEFULLY THERE IS SOMETHIN IN THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTER THAT WILL REVEAL THAT HER DEATH IS SOMEHOW IMPOSSIBLE OR SOMETHING OF THE SORT, BECAUSE SHE CANNOT JUST DIE! SHE CANT I TELL U, CANT!! *breathe breathe pant pant*... ok I'll be back in a little while..
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 11:28 PST
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=O!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!! I "accidentally" read some of the ending and wthhh!! SHE CAN'T JUST DIE!! ARNT U A BELIEVER IN HEA?? PLEASEE TELL ME U R! SMHH HOPEFULLY THERE IS SOMETHIN IN THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTER THAT WILL REVEAL THAT HER DEATH IS SOMEHOW IMPOSSIBLE OR SOMETHING OF THE SORT, BECAUSE SHE CANNOT JUST DIE! SHE CANT I TELL U, CANT!! *breathe breathe pant pant*... ok I'll be back in a little while..
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Werewolf-lover On: January 23, 2010 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story!
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Reviewed By: Hoshikouchu On: January 18, 2010 22:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow another great chapter! I hope you update soon, this tension is killing me! I don't care if she dies I just want to know, well I don't really want her to die but i just want to know! Love it!
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Reviewed By: Zvaigzduute On: January 17, 2010 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you had great holidays! This was so frustrating, yet amazing! It's so frustrating that it is so long, but at the same time I love that it is this long. This chapter is probably one of the best chapters in this story! And the way you have developed the characters too, it's not just the two central characters, it's about everything that is around them! And I love that you don't need to tell every single moment what the main characters re doing, it keeps the tension going so well! I cannot wait to read what happens next, I really hope they are able to find Kagome! I feel so horrible for her! And I am really wondering how you are going to include Kikyo into this? Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: chino-chan inu lover On: January 16, 2010 16:42 PST
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Why hello! Its been sometime since I reviewed my dearest fic!but I've been reading, and I sure as hell am not disappointed, and i am always waiting for the next chapter. As always I keep saying that you are the best fanfic writer I've ever crossed, I can only beg for you to keep doing it, for me to enjoy it. Thank you so much for doing what you do. I'd also like to ask you for your favorite fanfiction's names because if you like them and think they're worthy then I'm sure they must be extraordinary. I am excited to read about inuyasha's despair as he looks for Kagome, you do some great angst ! Lotta love from Portugal, Chino
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 23:55 PST
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OMG... I know she deserves that but I so hope that Sesshy is able to still get something good out her. I can't wait to read the next update. ...And Happy New Year!!!!
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 23:54 PST
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OMG... I know she deserves that but I so hope that Sesshy is able to still get something good out her. I can't wait to read the next update. ...And Happy New Year!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 18:01 PST
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Your skills are out of this world. I am in absolute love with your characters (the good guys, of course) and you always keep them in character from start to finish. I was a little scared that Sesshomaru would act all pissed and angry, which would be a tad OOC but he reacted perfectly for the way you've created him. Wow, just wow.... So Yuka is dead, huh? Cant say I'm sad to see her go, though its too bad since she finally got herself some sense right before she kicked the bucket but it was just a little too late. I have no idea how they'll find Kagome now, I pray for a happy ending though. Seriously your fans (including me) will be depressed for WEEKS if this ends badly... lol but youre the master of ceremonies so you do what you must. Oh and I havent forgotten to commend you on the speedy update, that is so highly appreciated because you saved me from a boring ass train ride. Thanks a bunch for that. Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 23:12 PST
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Angst! True down to earth angst! Very, very impressive. In crazy way of you're own... every main character in this chapter has shown some form of angst in their own little way. Even Sesshoumaru! How crazy is that! I can't wait for the next update... this fic just keeps getting better and better. It almost seems like it will never end... which by the way would not be a bad thing! ~Aijin T. Kounami
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