| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 01:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what... i was panicking that it was Koga... would of been a bad! lol but *squeals* love it ^____^ i burst into laughter with Souta XD i tried so hard, but i ended up laughing out loud and people at home gave me weird looks lol but i was squealing throughout this chapter! YAY! Inuyasha finally gotten over his stupid little voice inside XD listen to the demon!! and either way, your fogiven ^_________^
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 00:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a few typos, but I don't care! You get all perfect 10's anyway! I am soooo glad you said there was more fluff to come, because I would hate for the next chapter to be angsty after all that, like Kagome having no clue how significant everything really was. But I don't think that'll be the case. I remember that first bit when she asked him not to use a condom and his little "Open mouth, insert foot" moment, so it's already been established that Kagome knows damn well that youkai (and hanyou) have to wear condoms. Even if it did slip her mind in the heat of the moment, she'll realize what it all means in the morning. I love your little explanation, though, that reveals how the girl doesn't really notice the difference except for a more intense orgasm. So she might not realize that he did bond with her, but only that what they did was supposed to be saved for the bonding. Still, I'm not worried. He thinks he mated her without her permission, but it seems to me that she was fully aware of what she was doing, with that whole "Do you love me?" bit. First, she saw the look in his eyes when he asked her that, and then the way she asked it back for good measure... Yeah, Kagome knew... I'll reiterate my subject bar: Yay!
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Reviewed By: Animegirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaagh!!!!!!!!!!!! that was soooo amazing it was a long wait and i hated it but it was soooooo worth it! caint wait til the next (please read the end)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!thnx
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Reviewed By: wthlovex [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 20:36 PDT
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Yay! It was who we wanted it to be! I was going crazy without the update lol! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: goldenxtuna On: July 12, 2009 20:07 PDT
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awesome chapter!!! whooo, i feel very safe now about the entrace for kikyo or kouga ...they cant break inukag noww!!!!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, after that chapter, i've gotta say that's some nice heaven inuyasha got for himself. now, let's see how he deals with self-loathe. ouch. and thanks so much for the update! you are a genius in disguise, i know it! thanks to you i had the greatest surge of encouragement and what not to publish my own story called hello daddy! you are definitely a hero in my life!
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 17:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMMMGGG thats WAs AWSOme!! so glad it was INU i hope she marks him too!! somehow YAY!! so sooo goood update sooon!! cant wait for the next one! truely talented writer!! keep going!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 17:06 PDT
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I have a tendency to read the chapter before the author's note, and though I was just itching for this update, I'm glad that you took a vacation. You've said that you just graduated with honors and that's really stressfull ... I would know and it definitely calls for some rest and relaxation. Enjoy yourself and I apologize for my obsession with this fic =]
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: July 12, 2009 16:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost snorted milk when I got the email alert about the update. lol. Sooooo worth the wait. And I'm glad to took a vacation, everyone deserves one once in a while. Great chapter. Though I know Inu is setting his self up big time for not telling her what is going on. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOah O.O that was worth waiting for! That chapter was beyond words and THANK GOD it was Inuyasha, can't wait to see what happens next!Don't leave us for too long...
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 12:45 PDT
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hmm the longest wee've had to wait for an update from you i believe is ne month and four days... it looks like you're going to beat that record but please don't make it a habit. Eternally in love with your fic, lol
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Title: I'M SOOOOOO SORRY!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 09:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that haven't been reviewing in awhile and I want to apolgize. Your story is really really awsome!!!! And I wouldn't stop reading it for anything. And let me just write that "MadMistress65" took half of the things I would have put down in my review. I'm so in suspense! People saying that it was Inuyasha at the end but I have this weird feeling it's Kouga. IT BETTER BE INUYASHA!!!!!! Lol!!! But keep writing the way you like that what makes your story sooooo AWSOME!!!!!! See you soon hopefully!!!! SO UPDATE NOW!!!!! LOL jk jk
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Reviewed By: Ravens_Ashs On: July 10, 2009 15:21 PDT
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I have to agree with 'jess the best'. We have been waiting patiently for almost a month now and you are driving us crazy with the waiting...hehehe. Please hurry and update. I hope that all is well with you otherwise. Thanks for the wonderful story. Keep up the great work. P.S. Don't forget to UPDATE!!!...hehehe
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Reviewed By: jessthebest On: July 10, 2009 15:08 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish you'd update already! Its been nearly a month and I'm not sure I can take any more of this waiting! Of course I love you for updating way quicker than some other authors on this website, but still! Your writing is addicting don't you see that! We readers need our fix!...... lol ok let me stop. I am insanely hooked here, and I can't wait until your next update. I hope no unforseen mihap is whats delaying your update, but if thats the case then I wish you the best. But if not, then HURRY WOMAN! =P Thankyou
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 20:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very creative person and with that, this whole story shows how intelligent you truely are. It's people who create art like this who make me want to be creepy and ask for their e mail. :P Great job, your work is truely inspiring. But on the other hand, I feel like i'm on the wilting end of a one sided love affair. I sit here paitiantly waiting as you do what you do. :( I look every day to see if you've posted another, do you toy with us on purpose? (I'd probably do it, because it'd cause a reaction... but I don't like the recieving end of this)
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