| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 09:45 PDT
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I love all the little details that make it real--Rin holding the scissors she used to cut open the package of sausages...I'm bad at details. It makes a story that much more interesting, though. I really am enjoying this one!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 04:37 PDT
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this chapter was very revealing. it felt great see inuyasha's insecurities and issues. loved it.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 23:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT chapter. I loved all the emotion displayed here....and I'm so glad that Inuyasha and Kagome talked before she plans to leave. Doubts like those can fester if not talked about. Terrific job with that.
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: March 21, 2009 22:57 PDT
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fantastic as usual... and you always have sessh say something that has me cracking up. kagome going back to kyoto; kouga going back to kyoto... doesn't sound so good...
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 21:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
magnificent! that was soooooo good. gosh, inuyasha that jealous butt! =]
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 20:37 PDT
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I daresay I think I know whats gonna go down in the next chapter %D lol oh my Ninja powers. BUT! Now it makes sense eh? lol horahh for updates!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 19:45 PDT
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Oh the tears... It wasnt really that sad and I still have tear tracks running down my face... Anywho, two or three weeks huh? With Kouga there... It wont last, besides I dont think Inu Yasha could go that long without seeing Kagome... It was great, hurry up and update!
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Title: two cents
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha was two cents away from bein a real big baka. For a second there I thought she was really going to have to slap him, but it worked out (woo)... But I sense another baka on the horizon, I certainly hope that she's not as "understanding" as she once was. I loved that bit with Kouga in the beginning by the way you really write him as a first class wackadoo. Until next time may the muses stay with you!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh... I just reviewed the chapter in fanfiction.net, but I'll say it again. Great chapter! But stop revising it, dammit! :-) I get the sense that you're like me. You're not able to wait one more second once you're done writing, and you post it. But once you do it, you see the minor errors while you read it from the website, and cursing yourself to have missed such small but obvious mistakes you start revising the chapter. Is that close? Haha! You already have a beta, but do you need one more set of eyes to check the chapter before you post? If so, I can lend you mine :-)
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 19:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE YOUR NEXT CHAP. ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 05:19 PDT
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darn... he did not see how tight his ass was. hehe. But Din did deserve far worse than he got. Those bat youki intrege me alot. Why did he surround them when he left? was it just him passing to get out? Inu is going with her to protect her isn't he. He has to .... argh!!!! This is an awesome story. Anxiously awaiting the next update. Thanks again for sharing you talent.
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 20:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im so anxious! Gosh I can wait to see whats gonna happen next! Screw Dinshu! Really hope the lil f'er really is dead! Oh and I couldn't help but laugh as Inuyasha as he repeated the words to Dinshu that he used against Kagome... even though... it wasnt a laughing matter.. I just found it amusing is all!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 19:40 PST
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I dont know if i left a review when i read you last update... and if i did well then, youre getting two... i dont really have anything particular to say, i still love it, i still squeal on the inside when i get an email telling me there was an update... i have every intention of reading the whole story... but for me to do that, you have to update...
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 14:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'll be damned... Instead of having the Bat Bothers or Inuyasha save Kagome, you almost had BOTH of them do the job... Ok well the bats stopped him for a bit and Inuyasha killed him (I hope) but still its almost both saved her ass. Wonder if you're going to have Inuyasha meet Kagome's family and friends in the next chapter... (shrugs)I guess i'll find out whenever it gets here. Keep up the good work. Peace...
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Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 11:40 PST
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please please update i love this story so much
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