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Title: cruelty to fangirls is now illegal in all fifty states
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 20:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...that was like a punch there at the end...I don't know what to do, aaaaaaahhhh the cliff the evil evil cliff. Its make me think evil thoughts even. Save me from this evil cliffy soon. PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: Shadeless Night On: February 09, 2009 19:03 PST
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Holy crap. That. Was. Brilliant! And damn evil of you! XD That cliffhanger was so amazing that I want to both curse you and praise you :D Either way, thankyou for this chapter and CANNOT WAIT for the next update to see what you have planned XD I'm sure the drama will be just as good and twisted as it has been throughout the story and I welcome it! ;)
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 12:28 PST
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WOW!!!! I'm like....WWOOWW!!! That's about all I've got to say. This chapter has me on pins and needles. I know that I have to hold out until the next update, but I'm not too sure that I can. This chapter is just too intense. Poor Kagome, Poor Ashton, Poor InuYasha. Poor stupid Dinshu. (Who's dead no matter how you look at it. Either InuYasha's going to kill him or Kouga's other goons are. But no matter how you look at it, he's dead.) OK, taking a long deep breath and slowly exhaling after that dramatic chapter. Update soon. WHEW!!!!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 09:01 PST
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AHHHHH! o_o *scared for Kagome* omg~!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! Poor 'Gome! You just looooooove writing cliffies don't you? :P. I glad the plot is moving along and I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Title: Oh Dear God! Shoot me now!!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 20:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that you can be so mean!!! You leave me with half a heart attack!!! Either kill me or bring me back to life!!*** Woman!! If there ever was a cliff hanger this was it!! The dream sequence was amazing!! It was perfect!! "Staring down at the spot where their hands met, Inuyasha watched as a black substance that seemed vile and sickening began to seep through covering his knuckles, and inching slowly towards his wrist" That part turned me into stone!! That's exactly how I see Kikyo!! As something vile and dark, SLIME! Disguised as honey slowly coating you with sweetness but in reality being something that not even the sewers could hold! Your description was so amazingly accurate I could see it as if I was there!! That is the true magic of an excellent writer! To make the readers feel not as of they are merely reading a story, but that they are part of it! As if they were there when everything happened!! I have loved this story from the very beginning and it just keeps getting better! ***(Sight!)*** I fear for Miroku and Sango, I am hoping that somehow, by some miracle, they will not suffer anymore! They have endured so much already!! It tears my heart to see how each one has dealt with this tragedy and what is doing to them!! They do not need more!! PLEASE DON'T KILL THEM!!! *** Inuyasha is so adorable!! I am so glad that you make him more realistic by not writing him as this perfect being, strong and without fears! I think that is one of the main things that initially pulled me towards continuing to read after the first few chapters! He has real fears, real issues that anyone could understand! He is not fearless and invincible! He has limitations and emotions that make him seem more real!! I think that if I have to say anything about it it would just be "Thank you for not going in the same beaten path that most do: A grouchy Inuyasha, who is rough and wild, who acts more by instinct and who is brash and unaware of how his actions affect others!" I love your Inuyasha!! He is the kind of guy every girl can dream about! +++ Kouga is so sure of himself that I hope that everything that he has coming will be not a quick death! That would be just too good for him!! He is the kind of character that deserves one of those endings with not tons of blood, but instead, slow suffering,and large amounts of indescribable pain and humiliation. Anything less would just be a let down for all of us who have witnessed the pain he has inflicted upon others! +++ +++ Now, back to you missy!!! I would die of anxiety, and my family will come after you for restitution if you do not update soon!! And believe me, you do not want that!!! They will cry blaming you for my dead (insert violin music here), and demand meals, clean clothes,grocery shopping, etc, and that you feed the cats (who by the way, have to be loved and cuddled ALL the time!) and have you will also clean the litter box every afternoon!! IF this sounds appealing to you, then by all means!! Leave me here to die in anguish over what happens next! But if you love you readers, the way I hope you do, (insert guilt trip here) then PLEASE!!! for the love of all that is Inu, in the name of everything that is Takahashi!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (End of manic rant by crazy reader fan)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 18:36 PST
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asdfghjkl;' INUYASHA GO BACK NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! DXXX or one of the bat youkai is going to save her x:
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 16:33 PST
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omg... the suspense is killing me! =]
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I REALLY hope that inuyasha gets back in time!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 13:35 PST
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Ah no! Help! Well, I'm guessing that if Inuyasha doesn't get to her in time that the bat demons will. And that Dinshu is going to be wolf-sushi by the end of the next chapter (at least I hope he will be). The dream sequence was well done and capturd the ambiguity and the horror of a nightmare. I loved that you used Inuyasha's line against himself. Hee hee... Well, we all know what the demon and the dream meant. Now only if Inuyasha can figure it out. Not looking forward to Kikyo showing up! Well, thanks for writing, as always I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Matthew30 On: February 08, 2009 11:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and am looking forward to what is going to happen next. Kagome shouldn't be raped by Dinshu because she been through enough with Kouga, and Sango being attacked because of her, and the the whole hiding from Kouga and finally just being groped by him and kidnapped in her house. So please update soon the suspense is killing me thanks.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 11:39 PST
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omg omg omg ...please update like right now..I cant wait for the next chapter so please do it soon please please please
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: February 07, 2009 20:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... you've got me hooked!! This story is hype! Kikyo wants to get back in the picture to stealmore of Inuyasha's story.. plz update soon this story is CRAZY!! You have got talent my friend... plz indulge us readers who can't wait to see what happens next =)
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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: February 07, 2009 20:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... you've got me hooked!! This story is hype! Kikyo wants to get back in the picture to stealmore of Inuyasha's story.. plz update soon this story is CRAZY!! You have got talent my friend... plz indulge us readers who can't wait to see what happens next =)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 03:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo is back >.> Kagome is sticking up for Koga... omg back hand them both!! lol
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