| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 12:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
definitely a heart to heart chapter! thanks for you hard work!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 12:16 PST
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All I have to say is.... *facepalm* idiot! So you were munching your words on telling her what Ginta said because you wanted to be close enough to protect, and then you go throw a bomb like that instead. Bravo. Here's a medal - now bend over and let me pin it right!.......roger, over and out. Someone bring an inflatable ring for this ass to sit on.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 11:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... First I want to say I hope you have a family fun and safe Thanksgiving. Second... That was the best thing I've ever read, and yet it was heart breaking to read how she and Inuyahsa has to go through... Its almost like the connection is there but theres no signal... And I understand with the whole "should I tell or not tell?" thing. Very complicated and confusing, but hey its going to come out either way. So I hope you update and keep it up. Peace... And Happy Thanksgiving...
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 25, 2008 10:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods Inu! Just open your mouth and say the words your thinking! It would save you the trouble of hurting her even more! I wish I could ring his neck sometimes. lol. Great chapter :)
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 10:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter but I hope kagome doesn't get too mad @ inuyasha when she finds out. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! :)
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Title: ahh!! I fell off the cliff
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 07:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its like walking off of a washington state cliff at midnight in november cause you can't see for the fog, you kind of just slip off the cliff and you don't know whats waiting at the bottom. I'm scared for the next chapter I'm excited of course but I don't want them to break up I'm all all like "NO!!" and stuff.
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 07:22 PST
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OMG!! I was not expecting that!! What will happen now?! XD The suspense is killing me. lol, you are awesome! And Happy Turkey Day~!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 02:21 PST
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DDDDDDDD======= YOUR GOOD ENOUGH KAGOMEEEEE!!!! ;-; Inu just doesnt know it yet ;-;!!!!!!! hurrah for being awake at ungodly hours xD (its 6:17AM I am not sleeping this night/day) =_=;;; damn insomnia to hell Ashton's poor virgin eyes xD Inu should just fess up and tell her what he knows, its better he hurts her that way than Kouga getting a hold of her gawd! I know it seems hard, but if he were to realize the other choice, I think kags would rather he told her grrr!!! (the come here, go away thing was cute xD I'd be like kags XD)
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: November 21, 2008 15:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha better be on guard duty. Nothing better happen to Kagome, it would be too sad and so wrong. The waiting is getting me anxious. I am so curious to know what is going to happen next. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 01:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now all Inuyasha have to do is tell her what he knows and things would be a bit easier on him and herself.... But then again she'll just think betral and all that shit and go running right in to their hands... (shrugs) well whatever happenes, happenes... And Im going to be there to read it. Hope you keep it up and up date. Peace...
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Title: AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 11:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS AWSOME....IT'S GREAT!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON
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Title: AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 11:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS AWSOME....IT'S GREAT!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 07:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Poor Sango. It looks like she's still not out od danger. I hope they can stop those jerks from hurting her again. As for Kagome, it's good that Inuyasha is aware of what's going on. He's going to need all of the advantages he can get. This plot is EXCELLENT.
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Title: SUPERBLY MAGNIFICENT,SPECTACULARLY AWESOME
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 21:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FIRST OFF LET ME SAY THAT YOU ARE NOT DOING A GOOD JOB !!!! TOU ARE DOING A SUPERBLY MAGNIFICENT,SPECTACULARLY AWESOME JOB OF WRITING!!!! NEXT ANYONE WHO READ THE STORY WOULD KNOW THAT KAGOME DIDN'T KNOW OF KOUGA DECEPTION THAT IS UNLESS THEY HAVE A VERY BAD READING COMPREHENSION PROBLEM!!!! HOW MANY CHAPTERS???? AS MANY AS IT TAKES FOR YOU TO TELL THIS STORY THE WAY IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE TOLD!!!! WOULD THEY ASK LEO TO REEDIT WAR AND PEACE SO HE WOULDN'T DRAG THE PLOT OUT TO MUCH???? I THINK NOT!!!! THIS STORY IS GREAT JUST THE WAY IT IS,,,,A CURSE AND A POX ON ANY ONE WHO DISAGREES END OF DISCUSSION..... I ONLY WONDER IF KIKIBITCH WILL SHOW UP BEFORE OR AFTER THEY DEAL WITH KOUGA???? OR ARE THE PLOTBUNNIES WORKING ON SOMETHING FAR MORE INTERESTING???? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Title: SUPERBLY MAGNIFICENT,SPECTACULARLY AWESOME
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 21:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FIRST OFF LET ME SAY THAT YOU ARE NOT DOING A GOOD JOB !!!! TOU ARE DOING A SUPERBLY MAGNIFICENT,SPECTACULARLY AWESOME JOB OF WRITING!!!! NEXT ANYONE WHO READ THE STORY WOULD KNOW THAT KAGOME DIDN'T KNOW OF KOUGA DECEPTION THAT IS UNLESS THEY HAVE A VERY BAD READING COMPREHENSION PROBLEM!!!! HOW MANY CHAPTERS???? AS MANY AS IT TAKES FOR YOU TO TELL THIS STORY THE WAY IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE TOLD!!!! WOULD THEY ASK LEO TO REEDIT WAR AND PEACE SO HE WOULDN'T DRAG THE PLOT OUT TO MUCH???? I THINK NOT!!!! THIS STORY IS GREAT JUST THE WAY IT IS,,,,A CURSE AND A POX ON ANY ONE WHO DISAGREES END OF DISCUSSION..... I ONLY WONDER IF KIKIBITCH WILL SHOW UP BEFORE OR AFTER THEY DEAL WITH KOUGA???? OR ARE THE PLOTBUNNIES WORKING ON SOMETHING FAR MORE INTERESTING???? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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