| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 22:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squels* i have no doubt that Inuyashs will keep Kagome safe from Koga!!
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 06, 2008 18:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! I had no idea on how you were going to write Inuyasha and Kagome the day after their little fun in the sheets, but you surprised me and I absolutely loved this chapter! At first my heart went out to Kagome when she believed that Inuyasha had snuck out to avoid her, but then you had a very good and nice reason for Inuyasha to do what he did. The way Inuyasha and Kagome talked over about what happened was very well done. Loved the cow joke, you had me laughing. It is good to see that Inuyasha is more than attached to Kagome.Your doing a great job. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow well i'm so glad inu didn't treat kag like a one night stand i hope the end up a couple in the end good chappie and please update soon
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 16:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter!! Although I would walk on egg shells around you... yeah... I fear what might happen. I'm enjoying too that, in an awkward way, he opened up a bit, he complimented her and, he is seriously thinking how serious this is. Yep, it's a threat too... but, deep down in his heart he is realizing that he needs her more than he would admit. Thanks sweetie, thanks for updating and sharing it with us. Hope your things are going better. ::huggggssssssss:
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 16:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 05:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been so busy and finally have been able to read the last few chapters.. they are amazing. My skin is still tingling. Thank you so much for sharing this.
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Reviewed By: ikikik On: August 29, 2008 21:08 PDT
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please update soon! this is one of the best stories i always look forward to reading the latest update...so please, please, update!!
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: August 29, 2008 20:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was...GREAT! Plz say your gonna update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 20:34 PDT
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Awesome! Loved it! I'm glad that they finally did the dirty deed and enjoyed themselves throughly. I hope that Inuyasha shows some tact on the day after. But is that hoping for too much? :-) Great stuff. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Eye's of Eden [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you use the "hate" factor in this chapter (hey that kinda rhymes!) to sort of emulate what Kagome's trying to say to him. That sort of thing where she hates what he's done to her because he can do things to her that she can't control (and you've effectively portrayed her as a woman who likes to be in control of her feelings at least after what Kouga did to her) but she just can't help but crave it. I also like what you've done with Ginta and how he's trying to remedy his mistakes. In my opinion, it takes a real man to own up to something like that. But don't tell Inuyasha I said that! lol. I would have given this a perfect 10 in the OVERALL category if you hadn't cheated me out of yet another FULL lemon. lol. I know i'm such a perv. ^_^ ~EoE
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Reviewed By: EoE On: August 28, 2008 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you use the "hate" factor in this chapter (hey that kinda rhymes!) to sort of emulate what Kagome's trying to say to him. That sort of thing where she hates what he's done to her because he can do things to her that she can't control (and you've effectively portrayed her as a woman who likes to be in control of her feelings at least after what Kouga did to her) but she just can't help but crave it. I also like what you've done with Ginta and how he's trying to remedy his mistakes. In my opinion, it takes a real man to own up to something like that. But don't tell Inuyasha I said that! lol. I would have given this a perfect 10 in the OVERALL category if you hadn't cheated me out of yet another FULL lemon. lol. I know i'm such a perv. ^_^ ~EoE
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Title: WoW!
Reviewed By: PanicMouse On: August 28, 2008 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the very few fanfics that I am currently reading and of all of them this is the one I am the most into! I love it! You are doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 15:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! You don't let me breathe with your updates!! Never get the opportunity to read and review!LOL Loved those two last chapters, there is a lot happening and -knowing you- I dread what is coming... because, certainly won't be what I want. Yep, to destroy Kouga and Kikyo!LOL At the same time, I'm afraid about Inu/Kag's reaction to "the day after". I'm sure that a helluva of drama is coming. They made themselves vulnerables, if you would call it like that, so they will start hurting each other. Or not... LOL Excellent chapters sweetie, excellent job! Thanks for sharing it with us!! :huggggggggs:
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Title: IS IT HOT IN HERE OR WHAT!!!!
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 11:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL THAT MUST HAVE BEEN QUITE AN INTERESTING EVENING,,,, HOW LONG DID HOJO KNOCK ON THE DOOR BEFORE HE FIGURED OUT THEY WEREN'T GOING TO ANSWER IT???? hehehe DID HE BRING FLOWERS,,,,DID HE TAKE THEM HOME TO HIS MOMMY????snicsnic WHAT WILL GINTA TELL KOUGA AKA WOLFSHIT.... OYEA WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO TO THEM IN THE MORNING???? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: August 28, 2008 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg what happened first thing i know she's at the door then the next thing there in the room i can't wait to see what happens in the morning. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon
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