| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: MikoPrincess16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 13:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story. i just found it and it took me a whole day to read it but i love it so far!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 01:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts giggling* Totosai cracked me up here XD MY GOD!! i couldnt stop laughing XD but ouch... i forgot that Inuyasha never told Kagome that he was married... big trouble! maybe Rin can help
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 16:03 PDT
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at this point it may be best if he were to dial rin, instruct her to be candid and to tell kagome everything she asks and not hold anything back, then hand the phone to kagome... then he can go do chores for totosai while he waits. she may not believe him, she will believe rin. ♣ him allowing her to know of his secret will in some way make her more accepting when she finds out that he knows all about kouga. ♥ thank you ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 10:01 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashaloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 04:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it was too good to be true... One second she was practiclly all over the guy and now she doesn't want nothing to do with him, sad. She jumps to conclusions a little too much, but hey after what she went through with Koga who could blame her...? Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 01:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You start this chapter off with like the most perfect way to explain their relationship and how they feel... which made me cry like a baby because it was so beautiful. Then you end it like this.. which makes me want to cry like a baby because now I am just sad and frustrated. BOO HOO.... WAAAHAHAH!!! LOVE IT!!! Thank you for sharing.
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: September 15, 2008 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the suspense is killing me.. i love this story!... didn't he just tell her in the last chapter that she's always jumping to conclusions?!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 11:06 PDT
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oh man Kouga is getting closer and closer...creeepy but props to Sango for being so clever and cautious. Can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader On: September 15, 2008 07:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, my favourite sadist writer. You've done it again, laid out tantalising teasing incidents and left my poor mind wondering what's going to happen next. Excellent stuff. Btw, if you could write Kouga a painful, painful, embrassing death at the hands of any of the characters in this story it would be greatly appreciated. Til' next time. I wait on bated breath *bows slowly*
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 15, 2008 06:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Surprise, surprise. You always tend to do that with every chapter. Amazing. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it's very realistic.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i don't know what to say because i have been stunned again! seriously, this is so amazing!
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 14, 2008 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed how how Inuyasha and Kagome had seemed to not be able to be without the other, I was taken back on what and how their moment was broken. I hope Kagome does give Inuyasha a chance to explain himself. As for Kouga, well he is more than damn good-for-nothing and I would he prefer that he stay as far away from Kagome. But drama always draws interest and I know you have something under your sleeve and the thought of that has me curious and nervous. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 16:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON THIS CHAPTER WAS SOOO GOOD I CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 16:17 PDT
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oh no! she thinks that she's just spent the weekend with another married man?!?! i hope Inuyasha gets the chance to explain before she loses too much of her sanity and sense!! at first I was a little mad at Kagome for jumping to conclusions, until I remembered what Koga did to her. Speaking of wolfshit (the name of affection that i think i cant help but officially adopt for him), GO SANGO! damn she's intuitive. I wonder if cum-for-brains saw through her lie or not... it has me nervous. Anywho, happy writings, and until next time!! =)
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