| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 16:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn. it's just going to get hotter from here! thanks for all your hard work! this has been one story worth reading!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 15:36 PST
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Oh no he found her UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 15:36 PST
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Oh no he found her UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: damn wolfs
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 02:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to see how smart that dumb ass will feel when Inuyasha confronts him from fallowing him home. Ahh ha ha and he thought Kouga was hitting him hard. (had the same handle sense I was sixteen)
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 00:00 PST
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Thanks so much for updating so quickly. I thought I owuld have to wait until Sunday. Yeah! Well, I'm glad that the situation is forcing Inuyasha closer to Kagome. (Gosh darn...yes I am being sarcastic.) And I'm wondering after reading this chapter if Koga's youkai had chosen Kagome as his mate. It's a little unclear. Here's a quote from the chapter "She was his mate… Truthfully, she wasn't his mate! His youkai had chosen her!" It's unclear if you are referring to Ayame or Kagome. Maybe replace she with their respective names so it is clear. If Koga does see Kagome as his mate it makes a lot of sense as to why he's behaving the way he is. Inuyasha was definitely acting crazy in the last chapter and if Koga denied his youkai he must be hearing voices all of the time now. (And I have to wonder if it is even stronger for Koga since he is a full demon.) Koga's going insane! Hee hee... I'm just wondering why he ended things with Kagome the way he did if his youkai chose her. Did he think he could go against his youkai and simply choose someone else? Was he trying to end things with her in such a way that he could never go back to Kagome? Anyway, I am curious. Now I'm wondering when Kikyo is going to show up. Ack! She obviously tried to get a ticket from Los Angeles to Tokyo. I bet she's in Tokyo now. So what' she going to do? Show up to seduce Inuyasha and try to get some money out of him? And of course causing poor Kagome to feel even more insecure? Thanks again and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 23:51 PST
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Woah Koga is really losing it and the action has finally started! I hope stupid dinshu doesnt find kagome or sango and same with koga! Well update soon! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 22:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE it!! and dont listen to those people... coz i dont think your dragging the story out.. your just getting ready to spill what is probly going to happen in the next chapter :P coz i was all excited in this chapter :P and im happy to sit here and read what you come up.. i dont care how long its going to be ^____^ and Oo Inuyasha is getting more protective!! HOLY SHIT!!! he was sooo closed!!! *grabs the pillow* kick their asses Inuyasha!! and get Sesshy on them aswell!! :P
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 22:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear lord....koga is a nutjob. I hope sango doesn't get killed. Take you're time! I don't like it when people rush their chapters.
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is like AWESOME!!!! Every time I get an email saying that this story has been updated, I drop everything to read the new chapter. I really love this story. Furthermore, I agree with Niiicko. You take as long as you want to write YOUR story. You can't rush art, and this story is a work of art. Now, don't get me wrong. I can understand why people want you to hurry and get down to the nitty grity, because the story is just that damn good. However, you just can't rush a good thing and this story just happens to be one of those good things. What's next? That is the question. Update as soon as you can and thank you for sharing such an awesome story. Man, you ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 19:25 PST
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You know what, hon? You just keep on writing your wonderful story and forget anyone who tries to give you crap. Geez. People just need to respect you as a writer and let the story go where YOU want to take it. I am thoroughly enjoying every minute of it and I agree with Kagome not automatically suspecting Kouga. Why should she? You are awesome, as usual. :D :DDD Lol, I can't say it enough!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 18:04 PST
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whoa things are getting dicey. Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope nothing else bad happens to Sango either.
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Title: Right On!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 18:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job.....please continue....i love this story!!!!! :)
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Title: Right On!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lilsweetpea011 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 18:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job.....please continue....i love this story!!!!! :)
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Title: AAAAAHHHHHHAAAAAAA
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAHHHHHHYAAAAAAA NOW THE PLOT THICKENS!!!! POOR KAGOME SHE'S REALLY MIXED UP OVER WHO AND WHY THIS IS HAPPENING TO HER!!!! I LIKE THE WAY SHE STANDS UP FOR HERSELF WHEN ANYBODY TRY TO PUSH OR BULLY HER,.,., HER BOSS SEEM TO COME ACROSS AS A FATHER FIGURE PROUD OF HER SPRIT BUT NOT LETTING HER GET OUT OF CONTROL!!! WHAT WILL INUYSHA DO WHEN WHEN SHE TELLS HIM???? AND WITH KIKBITCH WAITING IN THE WINGS THINGS SHOULD HEAT UP PRETTY GOOD!!!! ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: nameless04 On: November 08, 2008 08:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story^^ Your story is really cool. I love the creativity....I just can't fathom what'll happen next. I am absolutely hooked so please update soon! I can't bear the suspenseXD
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