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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 16:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm so glad that Sango had sense enough to throw Kouga off the sscent....at least for a bit. But Kagome is in TROUBLE, now that that evil jerk has found out where she works. As for the Inuyasha front....darn that Totosai! What terrible luck. Totosai mumbling about something that is so obviously in the past....but also something that Inuyasha obviously has yet to share with Kagome. And when you add her baggage from an aforementioned evil jerk....you have a MESS on your hands. I hope that Inuyasha can talk his way out of this one. For that matter, I hope that Kagome gives him the chance. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: September 14, 2008 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG inu is married kouga is showing up what is going on please fix this next chapter plesae update soon
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Title: Faithful
Reviewed By: Tusuke On: September 10, 2008 12:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iamstillafaithfullreader.Thoughmykeypadisdoomed.Istillreadallthatyoudowithm ycell.ILOVETHISFIC!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sammy34 On: September 08, 2008 22:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great one of the best I read and you doing a wonderful job. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Sammy34 On: September 08, 2008 22:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great one of the best I read and you doing a wonderful job. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 14:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww! i've only read a few chapters, and i love it already! its so cute! =D
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 14:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww! i've only read a few chapters, and i love it already! its so cute! =D
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 04:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter just started my day as a great wake up call... Glad that you updated again and I'm sure you're going to do the rest. Glad that things didn't go down hill after their "Mooing" and what not (smirks) By the way, that cow thing just made me laugh so hard I thought my ribs split... Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the update! you definitely know how to keep readers on the tips of their chairs.
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so totally LOVE YOU! OK, I really LOVE this chapter and how InuYasha's dog won't let his human side make all the decision in his life. Especially stupid ones like just being friends with Kagome. YEAH! Thank You! THANK YOU! for sharing again.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 09:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Kagome and Inuyasha's feelings "the morning after" were so realistic! I don't care how casual a person is about sex, there would still be some awkwardness the next morning. And if something like that happened between friends, you add fear to the awkwardness, fear of losing any type of relationship with that person. And when you add the terrible baggage that Kagome has with sex....wow. My favorite part was the end, though, when Inuyasha was forced to admit to himself that things beteeen him and Kagome were much more serious than he wanted to admit. You did such a great job with all of that. As for Kouga, he is INSANE. I really hope that Inuyasha is ready to deal with him.....because he's coming. I can't wait to see what happnes next.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 06:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that is now my most favorite chapter please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: oh yeah..
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:52 PDT
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And I thought that last chapter was awesome (I think you said you were unsure about it, didn't you?) so yepp, i was satisfied (understatement of the week) XD.. oh, and I love the way OLDDOG333 refers to him as 'wolfshit'.. very appropriate, i believe XDD
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Title: I'm ba-ack :)
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i haven't been reviewing, but my internet has been down! I just wanted to say that that was AMAZING! im soooooooooo glad that theyre finally together! its exciting! and i rele loved the way Inuyasha literally had no clue how he had gotten to Kagome's house; hilarious! lol, well, i havent slept in a long time, so im going to cut the review short and wish you the best! Happy Writings, and keep up the amazing work!! :)
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Title: WOW IT IS HOT IN HERE !!!!
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 23:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW IT IS HOT IN HERE !!!! TWO CHAPTERS IN A ROW WITH SO MUCH LEMONY GOODNESS!!!!@!!!! OOO MY IT'S ALWAYS AMAZING HOW THE MORNING AFTER IS SO FULL OF QUESTIONS ALTHO THE FIRST ONE,,,, "NOW WHAT DOER HE/SHE THINK OF ME" USUALLY HAS ENTIRELY DIFFERENT MEANINGS!!!! AND #2 WHAT NOW????? KAGOMES FEELINGS WAKING UP AND FINDING HIM GONE WERE DEVASTATING TO HER BUT HIM COMING BACK REALLY HELPED HER!!!! AND HIS LITTLE SPEECH TYPICAL I'M AFRAID TO COMMIT RIGHT NOW,,,, LOVED THE WAY HOW IT WAS CHANGED IN A FEW MINUTES TO ICAN'T LIVE WITHOUT HERhehehe POOR GINTA HE REALLY IS TRYING TO DO THE RIGHT THING.... WITH WOLFSHIT GOING TO TOKYO THINGS COULD GET MESSY BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^ OTES GET THE NAME RITE IT'S OLDDOG333 NOT Olddog333
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