| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: fudge On: April 02, 2008 23:03 PDT
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1000 of 1000.....seriously had me hanging onto every last word towards the end. Love it!! update soon pwease!!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 21:43 PDT
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haha I hadn't realized I was holding my breath the last part of that chapter and when I read the last line it was all *whooosh*. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Katz5678 On: April 02, 2008 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! I cant wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: April 02, 2008 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow luv the chappie it's amazing how alike they are with thier personalites and past well keep up the good work and i can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 19:50 PDT
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*gasps for air, falls over, and dies* NOOOOOOO!! how can you stop writing like that!! ahhhhhh!! ((in other words, AMAZING CHAPTER, I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!)) ooooh, i bet theyre gonna kiss soon! ok, so im just hoping that theyre gonna kiss soon, but you cant blame a girl for being optimistic.. omg, i had to basically skim through all of the chapters and re-read completely some of the more recent or more important, its been that long! lol, but i understand completely how the school thing is, same here.. well, i gotta go, but i hope that the next update will be quicker!! XD, but its better late then ever, so dont rush, haha.. well, until next time!
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 17:22 PDT
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This was amazing. I love the foot rub, and how unconscious that was for Inu. I love how absolutely clueless they are about each others feelings. I am absolutely enjoying this story so much...Thanks for writing it. Dei Dei
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u haven'y updated in sooooo long but it's as good as always, Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 16:20 PDT
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!! WOW!! That was a great chapter! Totatlly had me on my toes on this one. Great job! You have done it again, written something so amazing that that... words cannot explain! Thank you so much and Good Luck with school!
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 16:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it:) very very much. I hope now that you have your laptop you'll update more:))
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Great chapter. I LOVE the interactions you write between Inuyasha and Kagome in this story. They are simply to die for. Inuyasha and Kagome are so alike....from opposite ends of the spectrum. But, suprisingly, it seems like Inuyasha (the hardass!) is falling and accepting it the fastest. And it's great. I absolutely love this story and can't wait to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 15:33 PDT
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OH wow. YOu were smotheringme with emotion. I loved it. I could feel the tension. And with the thought that Kouga or Kikyou can pop back at any moment. Im excited. Good luck with school. I will definitly be here waiting for an update to this blissful madness. haha.
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 14:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, really nice madam! Both are so cynic that's infuriating,lol. They keep dancing around each other with their own backpack, barely touching and allowing their previous experiences to drive them. Even if you want to kick them both, there is a small part of your mind that is telling "You would do the same!" and, it's true. Your life experience is what guide you and they are having problems between recognizing what the other truly means, to drop their self-built defenses and to take a risk. This means a lot of work for both of them -and to you ;), afterwards you are writing it!lol. Annnnnd, if you add the other sub-plots that are rooming there... well, it's going to be quite a job. But a very exciting and interesting one! Can't wait f/the next chapter!! Yeah, I know you have a lot of things life and school, but I'm glad you could give us an update, thank you.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 13:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Thanks for the long chapter. But... you now have my heart clenched in your hand. Amazing chapter, I need more. The love flowing from the pages have me wrapped around it. Glad you have your new laptop. sorry school is kicking your butt. But feel free to get away sometime and write more. (hint, hint) *smirk --- You are amazing!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 13:39 PDT
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Great chapter! ^^ I love the inuxKag moments. They are just too perfect for each other and don't know it. *squee* Can't wait for the next chapter! .. maybe Kagome just flings her arms around him and shows him what she wants. ^.^ muwahaha Keep up the great work! ^^
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Reviewed By: serenity rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 19:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and u better update plz just jokeing
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