| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 15:57 PDT
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write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hurryyyyyyyy!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm more comfortable with the emotions expressed in the story at this point than i was in the beginning. there's still angst, just not unprovoked hostility. i loved that you started the chapter by giving them a common enemy in sesshoumaru. nothing brings two people together as much as haveing someone in common to be mad at. you painted a perfect image to the tranquility of a tropical island. makes me wish i was there right now. i appreciatethe fact that you are not making them rush into acceptance of each other. in order to keep it believable, you can't rush things. thank you again for a wonderful story
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 12:58 PDT
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another great chapter:) update soon!!
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Reviewed By: *-Stranger-* On: October 08, 2007 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story... i was hooked the moment i read the summary... i'm sad that there was no more chapters to read so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren On: October 06, 2007 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. Love your style of writting. Can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 04:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad that i finally caught up to you. it's a fulfilling feeling, but now i have to wait for up-dates. in the beginning i almost quit reading. the feelings of bitterness from both kagome and inuyasha were right at the brink of making me give up on the story. the only thing that kept me going was the quality of your writing. i know every story isn't a happy story, but the seemingly total disillusionment with life and relationships is something that bothers me on a personal level. so it may be a flaw in myself, and not your story. i'm just glad that you didn't take that aspect any further than you did. i do like how you have developed the story to this point. i am eagerly awaiting your updates. and if real life gets in the way, i will wait. it never pays to try and rush a story. it comes in it's own time. thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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Title: awhhhhhh
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 22:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sososo cute!:) I loved every bit of it. Eeeeek, update soon! Pretty pleaseee. That made my day:):)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 00:49 PDT
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Missed reading this story sooooo much. This plane ride is hilarious,those two are like a walking boxing match. When they finally let go of their bulls**t it's going to be explosive. Until next time, happy writing
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
got to say... im starting to hate 'Boom chicka wah wah'.... its on tv WAY TO MUCH!!!! lol but awww Kagome was sleeping on him.... >.< i want to see that it!! AWWWWWW Inuyasha is starting thinking that he likes her soon ...... i CANT wait lol... NO i cant wait when their on the beach.... *wink* that will be classic ^^
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Title: Love the story
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must tell you that I'm enjoying this story a lot. It's different and not only because it's an AU but because how you are 'managing' the characters. The insecurities and refusal of relationships by Kagome, the hilarous and -in a way- so in actitude Sango, and of course Inuyasha. It's a break from Confrontations and Confrontations II -love those stories- but suffered and suffering sooooooo much with all the situations the gang is put through!!! Although, must say, don't shout victory yet on this story... have the feeling that angst is round the corner... lurking... just a gut thing. Okay. Nice chapter, funny and entertaining and love all the way you are playing with our beloved characters. Good job, keep going and thank you, thank you VERY MUCH for your beautiful stories!
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 16:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!! can't wait for more:)
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 09:31 PDT
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it took me a minute to read your chapter cuz of school, but this was great. i would have mushed the little kid in his head or something. he needed to mind his buisness. update soon kay
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 00:52 PDT
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I have mostly preferred Inu/Kag fics that are more a continuation, but I absolutely love this story. I just love your InuYasha, he is hhhmmmm! I so look forward to reading more of this story. Thanks Dei Dei
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Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter. I love how you write what they are thinking inside. You do it so terrificly. I loved the scene with the little boy and him saying "you like her, don't you? I can tell by the way you look at her." That was priceless. I hope when they get to Hawaii that they open up to each other. Maybe another drink or 4 will loosen them up. Ha! Keep up the wonderful work. I love your story. It gets better and better. and of course... please update soon :) ---Amy
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. Please update soon =)
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