| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 04:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's like watching two little kids saying "I don't like you" but can't hide that fact to well... Anyways, great chapter hope for more to come. Peace...
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 10:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the better fanfics i have read...keep up the great work and update soon! cant wait to see what happens b/w inu and kagome =)
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Reviewed By: fudge On: November 11, 2007 08:14 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how incredibly you write. i hope you update soon and keep up the amazing job!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 07:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWAAAAA~HHHHHH!!!! CUUU~IIITTTT!!! I knew Kagome was going to go to dinner with him!!! She just can't refuse a hot Adonis!!! :D Thanks for sharing! It is always amazing! Good luck on the next chapter, I'm so excited!!!!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 01:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wnt to see what inuyasha ment by you have been warned so please write more soon
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh very steamy. ahhh! I was just waiting for something to happen, and it never did. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. YEEE! I'm excited for it.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 12:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh, Im not sure who is craving the kiss more, Inu, Kags or me. Lawd...the sexual tension is so thick you could slice through it with a spoon. Gahh....they are gonna get so waisted. Well I wonder if some lil tidbit of info will be shared amongst the two. Sometimes a lil alchohol can kill the fear, and people tend to open up to emotions they dont usually show. So, we shall see. Thanks a bunch for the update! Take care!!
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 11:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, sorry I haven't been writing any reviews lately but I have been keeping up with the story. And oh how it gets better and better. This last chapter was so steamy. I really thought something was going to happen.. It's like dangling a banana in front of a monkey and then throwing it out the window. ARG!!!! Keep up the wonderful work. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for your next chapy!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: November 10, 2007 11:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i can't believe this chapter it was soo steamy i love this chapter and i can't wait to see the next chapter
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 07:57 PST
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Do you know how much i love this story? i always go to my email just to see if you updated or not. i really love this story, and this was a funny chapter. update soon.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 04:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fact that you're not rushing the developing relationship. keeping it at the point it is now makes people keep coming back. at least for a while. the confusion as to how to make a relationship progress is something that most people have lived through and can relate to. even the confusion over being honest with you own feelings, is something that is known to most readers. the trick, for the writer, is to find just the right moment and situation for that relationship to experience a breakthrough that will let it progress to the next level. i think they have to be in a situation that forces them to rely on just each other for either emotional or physical support. just having them close physically(as in sharing the same suite) isn't enough for them to break through the emotional walls they have set up. whatever you decide to do, i'm sure you will do it well. i like this story more and more, with the direction you have given it. thank you for another good chapter
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 23:02 PST
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Damn,this was a good chapter,I see some s**t is about to hit the fan with those two. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 22:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, while she may have denied it, so was he, if not more so. He wants her, and he knows it... should be interesting on how he gets her, lol. Till next time: update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 09, 2007 22:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah for the update! *lol* Inu is such a bad boy...and Kagome, talk about a spit fire. Do I see some drunken hooking up in the next chapter?Captin Morgan anyone? *lol* Can't wait to see more from you, great job.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 21:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Good GRIEF, these two are so cute! I know that's a silly thing to say about these two jaded, cursing folks.....but for some strange reason, "cute" is the only word that seems to apply! LOL. Their jealousy of even the thought that the other is talking or thinking about a member of the opposite sex that isn't them. Their silly, sexy arguments (MAN, Kagome has more willpower than I could ever have if she's resisted Inuyasha's sexiness this long, lol). I can't help but hope that something finally gives between these tow stubborn folks before they leave this beautiful island. And I look forward to reading more soon.
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