| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 15:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm on the edge. Love how the story is developing and the way you carry it out. Congrats! You created an excellent piece. Keep going!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Sesshomaru is definitely a ruthless s.o.b., but I THINK his heart was in the right place this time. Yes, he loves watching his little brother squirm.....but I also think there's some part of him that wants Inuyasha to be happy...and he thinks Kagome MAY be the key to that. Kagome was none too pleased to be coerced into this trip, so I have no doubt that fights betwen her and Inuyasha this time are going to be legendary, lol. I can't wait to read it. The scene with Nya was funny...but a little sad. He's hurt the woman's feelings, so HE is going to have to be the one to "Suck it up." I can't wait to see how Nya reacts to the flowers. They ARE an apology....half-assed....but an apology all the same. But, I don't think she's going to let him off the hook that easily. I'll definitely be looking forward to the update.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 13:43 PDT
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Interesting, as always...and I'm sure the next chappy will be even more engrossing! Sorry to hear your reviews have fell! Don't let it get to you- like everything in life, they dip and peak! It doesn't mean your quality is failing- its gettig better and better, trust me!!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 13:33 PDT
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Business is business is business... that interaction went down well. I enjoyed the mercurial quality of Sesshoumaru's character in this one; a totally different man when he thinks he might not be getting what he wants. Now all they need is a plane crash to put the cherry on the cake... that, or the mile-high club :p
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 20:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hook. line, and sinker!! Damn this story is so good! I am in love with it. You made me laugh and almost cry. Your story is so much fun and I am enjoying it so much. Thank you!1
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 17:41 PDT
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This text is absolutely gorgeous. Not only do you take your time in the interactions, but you develop their characters and their emotions so thoroughlly that I might as well be reading a proper novel that's worth every copious cent I spent for it. Marvelous work; I am willingly hooked and eagerly looking forward for more.
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune (im not loged in) On: September 08, 2007 14:41 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor kags wants to be loved! aww! *hugs kags* you'll have ur time to shine soon enough, girl!
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Reviewed By: Kat801 On: September 08, 2007 12:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story. It rocks. Update soon girlie
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 06:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon i really want Inu,and kagome to hook up soon
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Reviewed By: future author On: September 03, 2007 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story. It funny too. I can't wait to see what happens next between kag and inu. So update soon and keep up the excellent writing. Good luck!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 10:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter from agreat author, nice. It was beautiful how you discribed how it feels to be loved. And thats what most people need, want, craved, and do anything in their power to have. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 00:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww i felt heart broken at the end T-T all Kagome wants is to feel loved T-T
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 19:57 PDT
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poor kagome she's feeling unloved. great chapter love the story. You gotta update real soon
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are hilarious....if a bit HARD on each other to say the least. There is definitely love there....but it's well-hidden, LOL. As for the trip to America, I have no doubt that Sesshoumaru is going to find some way to make sure that Kagome goes on the trip. The fact that he knows that Inuyasha is betting on her saying no ensures that he is going pull out all the stops to get her on that plane, if just to piss Inuyasha off. Oh, brotherly love, LOL. But, more seriously, it's so clear from Kagome's sadness at the end of the chapter and from Inuyasha's cursing denials that they both want and need someone of their own to love. They're just so DAMAGED. But, hopefully it'll get better (if no quieter) in their lives from now on, lol.
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Title: Great as always
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 12:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you very much for the update. This chapter was awesome. I loved how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were fighting with their swords (shirtless). (Thanks for the image) I also liked how Rin was combing his hair. That is so sweet. And how Kagome and Sango were playing 20 questions was funny. I can't wait for the business trip. I see really great things happening there. (at least I hope) Keep up the terrific splendid work. I get giddy inside when I see your update.... so please please please update soon. Your story is amazing!!!! ---Amy
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