| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, those two are just fooling with themselves for thinking that.... And what kind of dad that kid has? Talk about scarred for life..... Anyways, great chapter, getting really interesting, and hope you update. Peace....
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: September 28, 2007 06:52 PDT
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I loved every bit of this chapter. So funny. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! the barriers are starting to come down! now things are going to get really interesting. you so totally rock
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 22:09 PDT
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are they ever going to get together
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Reviewed By: shijin suzume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 20:16 PDT
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I love this story so much. It's writtend brilliantly, and I love how you make the characters multifaceted. I've been reading the story for some time now, and I get so excited every time there is a new update. Hope things get better for you, and thanks so much for yet another awesome chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: September 27, 2007 16:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet. Nice chapter. When the arrive it should be really interesting...
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 16:30 PDT
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Always beyond my expectations!!! Malcolm was so adorable asking Inu those questions. Hahah.. that made me laugh. Thank you so much for posting this chapter. It was heart warming. Can't wait to read your next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 16:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cute chapter. Kids are so nosey and forward. Thats funny. I wonder who the father is...lol. Anywayz, I do hope things for you take a change for the better. I think it has been a crappy month for everyone. Next month is Holloween, that should be fun. ne? Well til next time, take care.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. Inuyasha's conversation with that kid was hilarious "Stay out of grown folks' business!" I loved it, LOL. And I'm glad that we are finally starting to really see the chinks in both of their armor. They are both potty-mouthed and damaged....but at the same time so worthy of being loved. I really hope that they have a REAL breakthrough in Maui; if the armor is already shaky and they haven't even gotten off the plane, there's a good chance that they're toast when they actually get around the romantic atmosphere of the island. I really hope so. I look forward to reading more as soon as you can post it. And I'm sorry that things are so crappy in your real life. We all have times like that.....and sometimes bitching to strangers can be very beneficial. So, feel free to bitch all you want, lol. Take care.
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 14:22 PDT
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When he isn't actively trying to be an idiot, he manages to be quite decent, doesn't he? -- Great rendition of your developed characters; I'm enjoying this story more and more and the chapters progress.
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Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: September 24, 2007 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is hot1 keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Priscilla On: September 23, 2007 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really interesting. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Smorts On: September 21, 2007 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's fucking fantastic! I love the story! You're an awesome write! Please update soon! Pretty pretty pretty please! Everythings great! ~Smortz~
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 21:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I kept seeing it being recommended on IYFG and decided, 'what the hell!' I love how you've portrayed Sango, even if she is OOC. I love the fights between Inu and Kagome. The Maui trip is going to be so fan-fucking-tastic! Forgive my language but I'm excited. Also, I saw that you moved to my neck of the woods. I hope you're enjoying it here with all us rednecks. Where did you move from anyway? I hope you love Charlotte as much as I do and I hope you update soon! Really soon!
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Reviewed By: kat8125 *nsi On: September 20, 2007 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT! You rock. Story is awesome. Update soon!
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