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| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] | | Pages (77): [ « ‹ 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 › » ] | Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:55 PST
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oh, and i love Ginta, just because he's against the evil that is Kouga, haha.. i cant wait to find out what'll happen if/when he finds Kagome, and i wonder when Kagome and Inuyasha will find out how alike they rele are when it comes to lost loves, but im not worried, because im with you.. when you rush things in a story, the story becomes cheesy, and cheesy is bad!! and just to make sure you know, your story is far from cheesy! lol, well i think ive said enough for one night! g'nite
| Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 18:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i love your fic!! sorry ive been rather silent while reading this, i simply wanted to catch up with what you had posted before i rele said anything!! lol, and all i rele have to say is, this fic is too good for words! i cant wait til your next update, and im glad you got a new laptop.. the battery on mine died months ago, completely 6 feet under, so when ever i get on mine it has to been plugged into an outlet. anywayz, i rele like your story, its one of the best written fanfics ive EVER read, and your an awesome writer!! keep up the awesomely awesome work!! XD
| Title: YAY
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 19:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YayYayYayYay! Aha, I'm excited for the next chapter:)! This chapter was really great, though shortish kinda *cough**cough* lol but that's okay with me -im notorious for short chapters (even thought i dnt have stories up anymore) lol- as long as there actually is a chapter i'm good:) Keep up the great work! Happy writing.
| Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 23:27 PST
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i like the way you defiantly make up words... im glad im not the only one!! lol
| Title: I can't wait till chapter 26!!
Reviewed By: 0xpeach_bear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a GREAT JOB! Whenever i read a chapter you keep me wanting to go on to the next chapter. Chapter 25 was really good and i can't wait to see if Kagome and InuYasha have a RELATIONSHIP!!
| Title: WOW WOW WOW
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 23:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Yasha can be such a jerk with Out even trying....lol But at least he Said he was sorry to Kagome rite Away and he knew he was wrong With Rin to,,,, not to mention she is in no condition to be upset like that !!!! He better apologize really quickly or I'm going to help SHESS kick his ass!!!! Opps I think I just did a self insertion In to your story.... Just shows how good It is it makes you want to get Involved ...hehehe I hope they do get Closer at her place,,,, they both could use a break.... As for Kouga I am sure You have something very painful and Humiliating in store for him!!!! BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" sorry I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 20:26 PST
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OH JEEZE!!! Hiding in the closet? Hide and Seek?? Sounds like my version of the game. =D Though I think you are crazy to think this is a short chapter and though considering your others... maybe . Though I loved it none the less. And I think I finally fell in love with Ginta. YOU GO GINTA!! lol Though Im not looking forwart to the meeting of Kagome and Kouga. And I wonder is Kikyou making an appearance? Hm.. oh well just gonna have to wait. And Congrats on getting a computer.. Now if only I could heal I could work and then maybe get a laptop darnit!! =D
| Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 19:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm glad that you updated and very glad that you made a longer chapter. Unfortinately for Ginta, Koga is not goin' to stop until... well, yeah you know. At least he wants to do the right and not go along with it. Anyways, hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
| Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 15:54 PST
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Killing me softly aren't you? I understand Kagome's reluctance to call first cause who wants rejection and guys are complicated in their simplicity. Just do me a favor puhweese before Kouga finds Kagome cause I know he will, give her and Inu something strong between them to fight for. Oh, I love the Sango character she is the girlfriend you always want to have in your life. Till next time, Happy Writing. P.S. Will we get some fluff in the next chapter?
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 15:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter!!! Now I want to slap Kouga senseless. He will get what he deserves!! Although, must tell you, I'm a bit scary about Kagome... will she get over him, how will she react when he finds her? On the other side, Inuyasha and Kagome, are meant to be, but are they ready for each other, will both of them leave their guards down to let the otherone closer? Your stories always leave me thinking! Too many questions and waiting for the bomb... yep, sthg is going to happen... angst is coming!! Arrrgghhhh On the funny side, What was Rin thinking!!!!! LOL Thank you, thank you f/the update!!! :bows deeply: Thank you very much!!!
| Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 14:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww poor kagome she deserves to be happy i can't wait for the next chapter
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 09:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woderful, plz help kagome get over her Kouga issues
| Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 05:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome like always:)
| Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 04:25 PST
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i'm glad that i've caught up with this story again. i'm also glad that some of the hard edge is coming off the characters. it makes it so much easier for me to read. i have always identified with inuyasha's perspective of taking life as it is, and kagome's ability to find joy in life, no matter what. so having two bitter, brooding characters wallowing in over mentation was hard for me to accept. i like it much better, now. thank you for that.
| Title: SCORE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 02:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totally wicked!!!!!!!! *ahem* You're brilliance in writing.... there are no words to describe exactly how talented you are! This fic has my mind reeling at the possibilities of what could happen next. I really look forward to you next update and until then... Ja Ne
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