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Title: INCREDIBLE!!!
Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely amazing and fantastic. it broke my heart, and still i want more. you are a genius. don't leeave us waiting so long again! you rock.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER !! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANT @ KNO WHAT HAPPENS NXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...amazing. I truly love this story. You are an extremely gifted writer. I cant wait to see what happens next...esp when Inu finally meets Kouga! On another note, I am so sorry about your loss. I too just lost family, my grandfather. It terrible and heart wrenching, but it will get better. Let your loved ones help you thru this time. Thats what carried me =)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL chapter. Kagome's history with Kouga was as bad as I feared it was. His cruelty knew no bounds. What a DESPICABLE, sick, twisted FREAK. A rapist and a coward. And Ginta, well-intentioned though he seems to be, is a coward as well. But he does neverthless deserve credit for stalling Kouga and making an attempt to find someone stronger than him to protect Kagome. I just hope it's enough. As for Inuyasha's strong reaction at the end.....wow. Talk about being driopped into the deep end. All it took was hearing the true story of Kagome's past to make Inuyasha drop all of his pretenses as unimportant. He knows that he has much stronger feelings for her than just frindship, as evidenced by his youkai side at then end. I just can't wiat to see if he acknowledges his feelings to Kagome, now that he's at least started to acknowledge them to himself. I will definitely be looking for the next one!
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Title: puppypal27
Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:04 PDT
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I wanted to write to you about you instead of your fic (although I love it). I just wanted to tell you that you will get through it. It's raw right now and it hurts and I'm sure that you are in the darkness now. But eventually if you dont give up you will find your way back out. It's ok to feel numb right now and to cry. Just don't let it consume you. I'm about to lose my aunt who has been a big part of my life to cancer. My grandparents and mother and father are already dead. My aunt was the last staple in my family of the "older" generation. I can only hope that it helps you to know that you are not alone in your pain. We all lose people we love dearly, but its how we come through the grief that matters. Try to remember the joy with your grandmother. Memories are powerful. Believe me. Visit her place of rest too. I find it very calming as silly as that may sound. I also advise you to talk out loud to her. It's not crazy and it helps a lot to get your feelings out in the open even if she can't talk back. I sincerely hope that your pain eases soon. With time you will be able to handle it better and you have your writing to help you too. Be well. -M
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Reviewed By: inuaeryn On: August 07, 2008 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freaking awesome. Wow, you pulled no punches, and as much as I like Kouga's character, I really don't like him now! LOL. You really did a great job with the emotions. They bled through in almost a tactile way. Fantastic. Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...................... ...................... ...................... ...................... there are no words to explain how you wrote this chapter. i cried for inuyasha, when he was punching ginta and thinking about all those things they did to kagome. WOW. the best storyline that i've ever seen.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 20:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I grinned so hard when InuYasha told Ginta to tell the other guys to come see how tight his ass is. THAT is how you carry out a beat down! Very New York of him...I like very much cuz, well, I'm a New Yorker, lol. Glad Ginta got his...now all we need are for Kouga and that other guy to get theirs a thousand fold. Loved the update! Till your next one ;) ~Amber
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh i love your fic sooo much!! i'm always happy to see in my email that you added a new chapter!! I'm very sorry about what has happened to you recently. I can't say i know how you feel, because truly i don't. But i know loosing someone you love deeply is heart wrenching. The best of luck to you i really mean it.
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Reviewed By: 0xpeach_bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really excited about the next chapter! They way you ended this chapter was perfect :). But now i wonder what Inuyasha will do when Ginta tells him about Kouga.... Good Job! Can't wait for the next chapter, you have made me a FAN :)
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 23:22 PDT
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Wow. I just started reading your story and I think it's awesome. They (I/K) make me wanna shake 'em, but I know it's for the best. I LOVE the 'grown' Souta lemon. There should be more of those. He is the least thought of character in Inuyasha fanfiction. Yay you!!! lol Can't wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 14:18 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT DAMN! Inuyasha is soooo head over heels in love with kagome!!! even to stalk ginta who's been stalking kagome? seriously, who is doing the stalking now!!!! i love this story sooo much! thank you for all your hard work! excited to read the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: alloreli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 08:03 PDT
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Humph....teasing me with that lemon warning.....well, other than that, I really enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait to read the rest, so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 02:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go Inuyasha! bas the crap out of Ginta XD
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 22:14 PDT
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Another wonderful chapter update soon!!!!!!!!
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